Love, wow. One word, so many emotions and feelings. Love can be enchanting, it can take you on a journey, make you experience feelings you didn't even think you could witness in a lifetime. It can make you feel like you're on the top of the world, floating on a cloud, your heart feeling as though it is weightless. The person you love makes you feel jittery and excited every time you see or hear them. Every time their name is mentioned anywhere, you think of that person and your heart melts. You try to talk to that person and your stomach fills with butterflies. Their voice sounds like a chorus of angels, filling every corner and crack of your heart. That person is always on your mind, making you become happy every day. When that person says your name, nothing else matters as you look into their wonderful eyes and collapse into a puddle of hearts. Love is so wonderful.
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I have experienced this many times( actually, I am going through this right now) and i"m sure many can realte, it's a wonderful feeling.
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cute,
and true!
some things you said were just a tiny bit cliche,
but some were very original
"Their voice sounds like a chorus of angels, filling every corner and crack of your heart."
Love that!
nice job.
thanks for entering and good luck! -
Wow...emotive indeed. Very wel done.My only advice would be to break it into more paragraphs.
-HT -
Heh.....
You know that I don't like love.
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I love it! You have a very good explanation!(sorry that isn't the word I want, but I can't seem to remember the word I want.)Love is so wonderful!
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