Jenny Was a Friend of Mine part 1

An electric shock of iciness pulled him down into oblivion. Barely conscious, he lay there, the stony wetness of snow numbing his insides. He hoped their secret was safe. Nothing more could be done to ensure her safety, weather he lived through the night or not. 1

“Please forgive me,” he murmured, and dreams claimed his mind.2

Fighting, horrible, belligerent voices. Screaming. She couldn’t scream as he held her close. His only motive for killing his beloved was jealousy. Throbbing, shaking uncontrollably. Her pain choked him into sobs. Red. The vibrant color mutilated her face. They lay in a deadly embrace, her mortal body crumpled into him.3

“Jenny!” he shrieked, reaching out for her, but she wasn’t there. As realization struck with brutal force, he curled into himself, the freezing nothingness beneath him barely a comfort for he knew it wouldn’t kill him; nothing would. 4

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