Twisted

Our legs are twisted together in the sheets. We lay together, arms grabbing and grouping. My hard dick grinds against your soaking wet thong while my hands claw at your back and bra. As it unsnaps, I throw it to the floor and devour your breasts, my tongue spends time on each of your nipples, licking and teasing. I squeeze your breasts roughly and you began to moan as I grip each of them. 11

The grinding ceases and I let my hand glide down your front. My fingers graze your skin but only in the lightest possible way. The sensation sends goosebumps up your spine, though it doesn't compare to what is about to happen.22

My fingers force their way into your thong and begin to rub your slit fiercely. They slid down it and pull themselves back up with greater force, all in a rhythm. Then they dart inside you an begin fucking you without mercy. They go in hard and deep and fast. By the point your pussy is absolutely soaked and you you cannot stand it any longer.33

You nudge me to remove myself so you can pull your legs up and slide your thong off. You then grab me by the arm and force me down on my back. Anticipation between grows as you climb onto me and lower yourself onto my dick. It plunges into you with next to no effort. You moan uncontrollably from the initial pain and pleasure of having a huge throbbing cock buried in your wanting pussy.44

Your hips start to sway back in forth in a slow but steady rhythm. As you get hotter and hotter you speed starts to increase. Your pussy also gets tighter and tighter around my dick. I can hardly stand it, it feels so amazing, so warm and wt, but I bite my lip in an attempt to last longer. I begin to periodically thrust upwards, I can tell it's driving you up the wall.55

By this point there is no controlling your moans. Every scream is louder and more passionate than the next. Now I am continually bucking upwards. Both of our muscles begin to tighten. You give me a look that tells me you are about to blow and I know it's time for me to release myself within you.66

My cum bursts into you like a rocket, and your tightening pussy from your own orgasm only helps squeeze out every last drop of it. We continue to thrash as our orgasm climaxes and begins to subside. Your limp body collapses onto me. I hold you in my arms until you gather the strength to look up into my eyes. I do the same and after a moment of silence I kiss you passionately. I really do love you.

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  • ohmygoth
    July 8

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    i prefer this over what i wanted, i think cos this one has more personal passion, they know each other and want each other, i love how discriptive you are and i loved how the guy was in control first and then near tothe end it was the girl, very good read xx

  • Wow
    That certainally loved this write of yours
    such raw passion and lust
    yet loving
    Cause we dont have to lose the sparkle and the touch
    Cant wait to read more and hope some sensual poetry too
    Julie

  • this is really good, u had me on the edge of my chair the whole time


  • Vietbabe909
    April 7

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    Good job, when you said I felt tingling down my spine, i actually did. Hahahah. This is good, I like it. Fore play is good, gets the excitment going. Nice job, i like it

  • oh my ... great visual (speechless)


  • Whispers silver member
    February 28
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    Some pretty nasty and delicious details you got here...very, very tantalizing. Good job.

    Ink


  • nextandykaufman
    August 16, 2008

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    bravo

    i couldn't have described it better myself. i had to laugh at the end because it is so graphic, it's like a joke on man-kind that this is what we strive for, but it is so worth it. made for a rather interesting read.

  • Lonely Christina
    August 11, 2008
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    omfg! this was hot lol wow im definatly excited now


  • hotchocolate
    August 2, 2008
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    This is really good!!!!

  • flirtychick14
    July 7, 2008
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    a little to descriptive


  • Soul of Draken
    June 9, 2008
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    Very interesting... I like your imagination!


  • B0b
    June 9, 2008
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    WOW!!!!!!! WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!!


    • EasytoForget
      June 11, 2008
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      .....
      thank you, thought you said you didn't like the guy stuff though?

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