- Life's Never-Ending Course -

  I wonder, a lot I guess you could say. About life, love, and all the other things that surround a teenage girl's mind. Its hard, having to live with all these thoughts miserably circling, dashing around in my one, small brain. The speed is just too much, and sometimes I'm too slow to hear when opportunity's knocking, or when a cry comes out from the silence, barely audible but still there. It hurts, knowing you could be doing so much better, enjoying so much more. The minutes, washed away, like the pouring rain outside a dark diner in the middle of the night. 1

But eventually, the dark clouds clear up, bringing the sun and its rays of hope. The never-ending "What If" seems to return, and with it, comes the curiosity of a better day. The minutes seem to be frozen in the pure white snow, and time stops, allowing those insane thoughts in your head to be scrutinized, one by one. Then it feels like everything will be alright, at least for a little while.  

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Well, this was probably confusing, very confusing. I'd understand if you got lost, I guess I would too if I wasn't the one who wrote it.


It was a little something to pour out my feelings with, release the anger and doubt.


P.S. If you got this far, good job, you're good at grasping the concept of things.

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  • Taylor Renee
    June 24, 2008

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    I did not get lost.

    I'm offended that someone would.

    You wrote this brilliantly; "The minutes seem to be frozen in the pure white snow, and time stops, allowing those insane thoughts in your head to be scrutinized, one by one." & "The speed is just too much, and sometimes I'm too slow to hear when opportunity's knocking, or when a cry comes out from the silence, barely audible but still there."


    ^^ My favorite parts. They're written beautifully.

    Really, though. I can relate to this perfectly. It's extraordianry

    YOU'RE extraordinary.

    I can clearly see; you're a writer.

    xoxo
    -♥-
    Tay



    Five hundred thousand applause!


    ...Or three.



    • Breathless Ballons
      June 24, 2008
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      Thank You. Thank You. *hold the applause*

      I'm so happy you liked it (and didn't get lost!)

      And we have the same favorite parts I read it again after I finished writing it, and those were my favorites also! Great minds think alike!

      Thanks again!

      ♥[Gio]♥

      • Taylor Renee
        June 24, 2008
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        You're welcome! *Throws a bouquet.*

        Me, too. And I'm so happy you wrote it >.<

        Hah! I agree completely

        Any time!

        xoxo
        -♥-
        Tay


  • Shadow06
    June 18, 2008
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    I did get lost, but I liked it. It's good to release your feelings.

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