Lost Wishes (A Twilight Fanfiction)

Rosalie glared bitterly at Bella and Edward as they left the house together. How could anyone be so willing to give up their humanity? For all her beauty and immortality, Rosalie wished that she had never been turned. All that she had want was a baby, a living being that she had created. But, now, with this God damned, 'perfect,' sterile body, that wish would never come true.1

The blond vampire walked away from the rain-streaked window. Settling herself on the living-room couch, she tried to push melancholy thoughts from her brain. It did nothing to think about what could never happen. Except of course make her angry and sad. To help distract her mind she made a short trip to a bookshelf. Grabbing a leather bound volume, she headed back.2

Sitting back down, Rosalie looked down at the book. The cover proclaimed the title in large, gold letters: 'Jane Eyre.' She gave a sigh of relief. The tall woman was sure that the romance would be incapable of making her feel worse. After all, she had already found love in her sweet and wonderful Emmett. There was no way that a romance could make her unhappy.3

Opening the book, she flipped through the pages, reading sentences and paragraphs at random. Her butterscotch eyes widened in horror as she read a paragraph at the end of the novel. The character, Jane, had a baby! How dare the book taunt her that way? To shove the main character's sweet humanity down her throat. To make her, who seemed to be the only one who wished to be human, feel so piteously sorry for herself. How dare it?4

She tossed the book to the opposite side of the couch, and stormed out of the room. Gliding from room to room, she searched for someone to talk to. Talking about something, anything, would make her feel better. To her sever disappointment, she could not find a single member of their coven. Carlisle, obviously, was caring for his patients at the hospital. However, this did not account for anyone else. She bit her lip, upset that no one would bother asking her if she wanted to do something. 5

Abandoning her search, the lovely, but self-pitying vampire sulked into the garage. Sitting down in the drivers seat of her crimson BMW convertible, she wished that there was something wrong with it, so that she would be able to repair it. But of course there wasn't, so she instead, sat there feeling sad for herself.6

She must've been sitting there a long time, because she was still there when the garage opened, revealing a dark night. Emmett backed his jeep in, beside the convertible, and he and Jasper got out of the car. For a second, Rosalie thought that they hadn't seen her, but then Emmett whispered something to Jasper, and the latter left for the house.7

The short moment of happiness that Jasper's ability had brought, faded quickly and she was soon just as sad as she was before. Dark-haired, muscular Emmett opened the passenger door and slid in beside her. He wrapped a strong arm around her and gave her shoulders a reassuring squeeze. 8

"What's the matter?" he asked, concerned.9

Rosalie shrugged as if she weren't going to speak, but the words escaped her lips, regardless. "Bella doesn't know what she has. She doesn't even care that she's going to ruin everything she has now."10

"Is that all?" he asked, sounding shocked that she would get herself so worked up about the human girl's desires.11

"No. I wish that I had what she had. I wish that I could still do the things that humans can do." She turned sad eyes to him. "I wish I could have a baby."12

Emmett kissed her cheek gently. "I'm sorry," he said.13

A small smile lit her face when he kissed her. Not everything about being a vampire was bad. Even though her wish would never come true, she would always have her Emmett.

Author notes

All Twilight characters (c) Copywrite to Stephanie Meyer. I do not
own any of them.
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This is Option #3
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My favorite flowers are honeysuckles.
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My favorite book is New Moon, and this takes place during either Twilight or Eclipse.
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My favorite color is deep, royal purple.
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Jacob > Edward.

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  • Kyndal Laran
    March 21

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    Rosalie is a smart woman, i wish she could have her baby. I like the way she sometimes sulks, but ends up happy in front of Emmett. They are trully a perfect couple. At least she gets to have him FORVER looking beautiful.


  • Rose Hathaway
    January 9

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    Wonderful!

    This was really wonderful, I could feel Rosalie's jelousy and hatred for Bella and it really came across as I was reading this. If Twilight was written from Rosalie's point of view this would definitely be part of the book! Well done and thankyou for entering my contest.

    Mikaela xox Best of luck

    Im so sorry im using all my points in my contest so I have none to give you clappies with, but if its worth anything if I had the points I would give you 3 clappies withou8t a second though.


  • Cupcake14
    December 22, 2008
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    Really cute fanfic


  • whenever love dawns
    July 22, 2008
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    thanx for entering...again! Good luck. was even better the second time.


    • demonp3n
      July 22, 2008
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      Oh! Would you like me to enter a different Fanfic? I'm in the process of writing another one. I can enter it instead, once it's finished.

  • whenever love dawns
    July 9, 2008

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    i really liked how you took a more minor character and made a window into their emotions and thoughts. this was very good. thank you for entering!


  • TheFemmeFatale
    July 8, 2008

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    Hey, Hannah darling! I love this story! I got all excited when I saw it. :]
    I commented before, but I thought I would again. I loved reading it again, mostly because I love seeing inside the mind of Rosalie (so many people dislike her, but I think she's fascinating).

    Nice work! Thanks for entering!

    • demonp3n
      July 8, 2008
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      Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

      I like Rosalie too. I think it's messed up that not many people like her, just because she was a bitch to Bella. Seriously.


  • Olinda
    June 26, 2008

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    just write your favorite book and the title of the book you wrote under.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    anyway... very good... i really really liked this. It has fantastic emotion, and a bit if irony in the jane eyre part. Very good work... just enter the stuff in your authors notes plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!

    • demonp3n
      June 26, 2008
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      Oh my God, I'm so sorry. I'm on vacation and I have four-year-old cousins with me, so it's hard for me to consentrate on thing. Sorry, I'll add it now.

  • detty
    June 19, 2008

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    Wow, now that I read this, I feel that Rosalie's role is really underplayed. I kind of like her though! This was a good read, and I really love the Twilight series! (: Good job.

    Please read the rules though! Thanks for entering my contest!


    • demonp3n
      June 22, 2008
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      Sorry. I'll put my favorite flower in the author notes now.

  • TheFemmeFatale
    June 11, 2008
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    Aw

    I actually adore Rosalie, so this was quite the treat You've got the description of how she moves down pat, might I say.

    And it's always nice to see the soft side of Emmett's burliness. Gotta love Emmett.

    All in all, I loved it!


    • demonp3n
      June 11, 2008
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      I know! I love Emmett. Not as much as I love the werewolves, but I still love him.

  • sugarrrainbow
    June 7, 2008

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    Very good!
    I've never read anything from Rosalie's perspective, so this was really original. I can't imagine what it would be like to be infertile, but I could tell Rosalie was really sore about that. Well delivered!
    Good job and good luck in the contest!


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    June 7, 2008

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    I really like the way you portray Rosalie's bitterness. It really does seem to be all that she's about. I think it might have been a little bit better (and perhaps easier to portray) if you had done the story in first person.
    I really do think this one done incredibly well.
    Thanks for entering!
    ~Memoirs


  • moonwriter
    June 7, 2008

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    (sorry for the delay. Multitasking)

    After I deleted the first comment and everytihng, it still won't give me back the more convenient scrooll box thing. Stupid scroll box thing.

    And I'm going to stop rambling about the scroll box thing and move on to the constructive part.

    Okay. You mention she's bitter, but you could better delve into the bitterness that's in her heart. Maybe have her lament a little more and maybe even bring in some of her past. Just spend a little more time on how she feels and why it's bothering her. You do mention it, but spend a little more time exploring the character's feelings and reasons.

    I would say you need more descriptions, but for this kind of story you really don't. If I'm right, the main focus of the story is emotion.

    Really all you need to do is explore Rosalie's emotions a little more and you'll be good.

    I really liked this story. It was really good. It was so cute how sweet Emmett was! I really loved your story! I wish you the best of luck in the contests!

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