The kiss

It was the beginning of school. I was ending my night the usual boring way when my Friend AK imed me."Dude, you wanna meet a hot girl tomorrow?" he said. I didn't realize then that it would lead to me having the most romantic experience in my life but i was a horny little bastard so i of coarse agreed.1

Well at that time i was going to a different school and i got out early everyday. When i got out of school i drove over to pick up my Friend and this "hot girl" and we ended up lost for an hour when i had to drop off AK. I asked this "hot girl if she wanted to go home but instead we went up to a mountain.2

After about 2 minutes of walking she showed me an opening in the barbed wire and led me up to a rock where we were all alone. Nature surrounding us, the lust and love were heavy in the air. We started talking to each other, we talked about everything and about nothing. That's when i noticed she had writing on her hand "press for a kiss" and of coarse out of curiosity i squeezed her hand. I half expected a kiss on my cheek but when out lips touched i could have sworn i was kissing some kind of Devinne being. I was filled with an unknown feeling that i had never felt before, a feeling no other kiss had produced. In total shock and awe my hand mercyfully let go of hers. She was smiling, as was i and we just continued talking for a bit.3

That was when i could take staring into her beautiful face anymore, i squeezed her hand must more gently than before, much more affectionate. I have never had anything more satisfying since.4

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  • Ankeeta
    February 28, 2005
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    good one


  • lightwithinyourdark
    February 21, 2005
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    awww, this is so sweet. can't say i can relate, i think most romantic experiences like that are gone forever, so i guess your lucky. you must like the girl alot. wow, i don't think i've ever heard a guy open up like this before. anywho, awesome write, so keep writing, and have anice day!!!!!!


  • Erdz
    January 28, 2005
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    i love this. it is just plain awesome. i can totally relate to it too. don't you just hate how words arent enought to describe the feeling anyway. great write i will definatly check out more of your work...josh