"Good evening fellows, I just like to ask you a few questions about your ventures as roommates. I see you guys live in some pretty close quarters. Now which one wants to speak first... John?" asked the reporter.1
John: Just a minute I need to wake-up Ron. Hey Ron wake- up it's night time again...whoopie! Look at her she wants to chat with us.2
Ron: Why don't you just go back to sleep....3
John: Hey man it's time to get busy....4
Ron: You think everybody is your gal, I hope its not that skinny one again she had me in pain all night long.5
John: Come on man just get up, enjoy the groove...6
Ron: Groove! Thats all I felt rubbing against them bones. Poor gal must of been a sucker for pain.7
John: You have to admit the release was pure powerful magic.8
Ron: Magic! Magic you say...I was battered, bruised are you a damn sadist?9
John: Ah! shut the hell up; you liked it10
Ron: No! man I loved the thick gal, soft, hot...all that cushion for the pushing. Like kissing warm air s-m-o-o-t-h !11
John: Yeah I remember the islands; all those coopertone beauties. Full hips, big boobs. You know they enhanced Ace.12
Ron: I know thats the guy I should be mad at. He gets us into all this swinging, slinging action...damn marathon man.13
John: Be quiet man he's yawning....14
Ron: Oh shit! look there's the chick, she's thick the way he likes them.15
John: Ron you know for Ace having one eye, he's blinded with lust..... he don't miss nothing. Shhhhhhhh!16
Ace: Um m m m m m what have we here? Raising his one eye brow...'Okay boys time to go to work..."17
John: Okay, okay okay am ready..(panting)18
Ace: Look at that big ass, swaying..you guys can stop hanging around now lets get busy.19
John: Hey Ace am ready but Ron is always complaining.20
Ace: Patted John in pride, then he cupped Ron...let's go on over to Lucy's house.21
Ron: Is she thick man? I like um big...they soft, hot and sweet; besides she kisses me and licks you.... (oh boy)22
Ace: Tonight both of you are in for a real treat. Old Lucy has some good pussy.23
With that said the boys were happy to step into the shower. Getting ready for a heated date with old sweet Lucy.
Ace stood erected and proud..Ron smiling cause she was soft and round. John swelled with glee ready to wet the way for the pushing. 24
Well she summed up her report that the boys in most cases are alive and well; ready for action. "Now if you don't mind I will slip into something comfortable like my birthday suit," she said to the owner of the boys. 25
Smiling now the reporter was last seen holding onto the boys...and kissing Ace.26
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Author notes
Let me introduce you:
John & Ron.... twins
Ace....the boss
The male members in your BVD's
Comments
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THIS
is so fucking clever
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I will have to say that it is in the style of my interviews at Storywrite. You did an excellent job of keeping it a surprise to the very end for the reader to get the final punchline. Fantastically done!!!!!
Ted E
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very unexpected. I liked the humor and the thought pattern of each guy.
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its fun being a boy,,,i have a twin called john ,thanks for the humour
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lol great humorous tale of who's ruling whom
Love, C
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Funny start
Sounds like typical male conversation. I think you hit the nail on the head. You could probably add on to the story from here and make it a full one. Keep writing.
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Hahahahhahahahahaahaaa!!!!!! Yep!!! I bet that is exactly the conversation that goes on down there is like!!!! This was just awesome!!!! Not sure that I want to know what inspired this though......hahahahaaa!!! Well done Novy
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I enjoyed the humor in this piece and the interplay of the conversation. Nice idea - formatting it as an interview/script. I think it was the best possible approach to what you have here.
I'm glad I had a chance to read this. Good luck writing!
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Hahhahahahahhahaa
Hahahahahahahhah
That was so great. Great imagery in this one Novy. So what that the twins had different points of view? Made it all the more interesting. Hahahahaha. Well done for this. Fantastic work.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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Hahahahahaha! Very funny, very entertaining. So the "twins" have different points of view, huh? Oh, well, but they have no choice but to do what the boss [Ace] says. Maybe they'll get some sugar, too...
I love you,
Brazos
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