Thunder and lighting where out in the pasture playing together. That morning when i came to the barn i called them in for dinner.They did'nt come so i yelled to them agine and still did not come.Out of the corner of my ear i could here a horse whining to me, I looke out in the pasture and thunder was stuck in the fence and was trying to call me while lighting was trying to find me.I whent out there but i could not get him out,I called the animal hospital to ask them if thay can help me get my horse out of the fence.Thay arived and got him out of the fence,thay said'we have to take him to the hospital is that okay?'and i said'ya'after thay left lighting found me and was trying to tell me something was rong but i took him and put him back in his stall.He took a look where thunder was stuck and wineyd.They called me the next morning and said'he passed away last night and if i want'ed to come get him to bare him you can'then i said'ya i'am on my way'when i was talking on the phone i was crying.i brought him home and baried him onder the willo.I tried to cover his blood by the fence where he got stuck.I let ligting out but she acked like she know what happend to thunder and layed under the willo by his grave.1
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This is a very touching story, SunnyBunny. It's always sad to lose a pet or other special animal. yOu did a pretty good job telling this story, however you could make it even better with some editing. Just re-read it and make changes as you go, then re-read again and again until you're satisfied with it. You have potential as a writer, in my opinion. Just keep writing
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