Character Profile: Emalyn Olivia Archer

First section: Character Profile1

1. First Name: Emalyn Olivia
2. Last Name (if any): Archer
3. Age: 17
4. Gender: Female
5. Species (for the sci-fi/fantasy genres): human
6. Bodily Appearance (Eyes, hair, shape, distinctive marks, etc): Raven-haired, hazel-eyed. Hair flows miudway down her back, usully wavy. Slim, not supermodelesque skinny. Pale skin, light freckling across her nose. Petite, 5'4. Small bumps on her neck.
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7. Origin (A little bit about what makes your character who they are): Emalyn normally tended to be a happy-go-lucky girl, although serense, but now, after a series of happeneings, she is left doubtful. Betrayels by friends, even supposed loved ones, takes its toll on her. She is no longer as trusting. The period she spends as a vampire strengthens her sens of determination; she is strengthened by the trial she has had to go through to resist caving in to her monstrous side. But now she harbors doubts, is no longer as gentile as she once was, and takes a rather sarcastic, sometimes bitter, view of everything. 3

8. Love Interest/s: Currently, possibly a close friend, although she has yet to learn that not all males are insensitive and/or deadly.4

9. Likes & Dislikes: Despises "social ladders" and high-school parties, finds them pointless. Loves gymnastics, and in some un-admitting part of her, cheerleading, although she will never fail to complain. Loves to write articles for the school paper, likes to dance, only for personal amusement, and detests revealing clothing. Likes helping people out...to a certain level. Likes to simply hang with her best friends. Detests Skye, the vice-cheerleader. Abhors the color red, as well as the person who caused her to hate her once-favorite color.5

10: Virtues:6

Bravery:    her worry for the lives of her loved ones gives her the bravery she needs.
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Curiosity:     Is very inquisitive, main reason that gets her in the middle of her mess with vampires8

Defiance:     Defies normal rules she does not like. Sometimes leads to her being an outcast in her social circle.9

Determination:     Despite her hopeless situation, she rises to the challenge.10

Forgiveness:     Forgives once she feels someone has given her good reason.11

Honesty:     Her honesty  sets her out from the other girls in her group. Leads to unwanted - and potentially fatal - attention.12

Humor:     Finds amusement in dark situations. Saves her from losing herself during her monstrous-phase. Industry:    13

Kindness:     Will help out whenever she can, although this becomes a bit lessened later on.
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Love:     One emotion she feels that saves the life of one of her friends from her.15

Loyalty:     Will do anything to help someone she cares for. This places her in danger sometimes, when done blindly.16

Reliability and trustworthy: is always the "shoulder" to lean on. This trait eventually gets to her, particularly when she finds out she is being used.  
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Responsibility:     Is the Editor of the school news[paper as wel as other activities.18

Simplicity:     Is straightforward, and unpretentious when it comes to portraying herself.19

Toughness:    The light-hearted, sensitive cheerleader eventually hardens under the supernatural circumstances she faces.
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11. Vices:21

Doubtful: her experiences have taught her that few in this world can be trusted. This causes  issues when she distrusts the wrong person, a near-fatal decision. 22

Impatience: dislikes waiting in general, also wants to get things done too fast. Bad decisions arise as a cause. 23

12. Ambition/Desire: Wants to be a proffesional journalist.24

13. Conflict: Halfway through her senior year, her life takes a turn for the worse when she is turned into a vampire. The involuntariness of this act gives fuel to her previous anger at the now petty things in life. This, appended with her nonacceptance at the fact that she is now a vampire, doomed to live off human blood, and her eventual realization that she may have to stay this way forever, leads to a dark period of rage, animal hunger, and deadly face-offs with a foe.25

14. Vocation/Calling: Journalism world.26

15. Additional Notes: I realize that Emalyn's character may seem funny, as she is both "kind and monstrous". This is because, during the novel, she undergoes a hill of emotion, ranging from peaks, which are the humane periods of her mind, to valleys, which depict the monster inside of her. Emma often takes a sarcastic-humorous view on things, and tends to gloss over the nasty side of life this way. 27

That is all there is to Emalyn Archer.28

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Second section: A sample scene (100 - 400 words)30

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The prom...I was at the senior prom.32

Someone kill me. This was a classic case of Lestat Meets Lindsey Lohan. The people surrounding me were about as powerful against me as Lindsey against Anne Rice's imaginary fangs. 33

For a moment, I hovered, willing my mind to block out all sense of smell, lest I break the fragile control I had reserved for this night. Couples waltzed around me, skirts swirling, hair flying, laughter and excited chatter floating over the air, mingling with the distinct beats the DJ threw out.34

“Emma...you came.” A familiar male voice, sounding incredulous.35

I froze, feeling my already-accelerated heartbeat take off like it was powered by diesel fuel. Oh. No. Not right now.  Not at my weakest.36

I turned slowly, dreading, the silken hem of my turquoise gown swishing against my heels. Dancing green eyes caught my own hazel pair. He was dressed in full black, striking against those emerald eyes.37

“I was afraid you wouldn’t come.” He grinned, looking relieved. I raised an eyebrow.38

“I’m not that weak, you know. I do have some semblance of self-control.”39

At least, that’s what I’d believed until he walked over and slipped an arm around my shoulders.40

My body was instantly on high alert, both human and animal inside screaming their separate warning. The human part warned me where this was going, the animal...warned me that I was a self-starving vampire, and that prey was right beside me. 41

The warmth radiating off Luke invaded my senses, driving out coherent thought. Suddenly, all that I could focus on was the proximity of his body to mine, the arm along my shoulders heating me, flowing with blood: pure, warm, strengthening...delicious.42

“Emma?” His voice sounded faint to my disoriented mind. I stared at the opposite wall, silently willing myself to calm down, reminding myself that this was Luke, my best friend, and that I could never harm him, there was no reason to get uptight...43

“Oh.” Luke pulled his arm away, backing up a step. Feeling like I’d just broken the surface after a long stint underwater, I took a deep shuddering breath, then slowly turned my head toward him. He was watching me, his expression unfathomable.44

But I knew what he was thinking. What Miranda must have thought too.45

Why am I the one who has to deal with this...monster?46

Luke spoke, barely audible. “Why you, Em? What did you ever do?”47

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Third Section: A link to your story 49

Novel: Tales Of An Unwilling Vampiress 50

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Author notes

I'm thinking of scraping this scene altogether, because I'm not convinced that Emma shines through here. Although her being at a prom...not very likely she went voluntarily. XD

Oh, yes, this is a fake scene, not a spoiler guys.

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  • cool


  • Intrepid
    September 19

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    I appreciate the effort anf detail you put into this character profile. Your character shined and was damn realistic and believable. I just felt in love with the way you went about presenting this piece. Not only in style but with the depth that went into producing the character: top marks for your chosen character name.

    I ask you to awnser a simple question: what is gave you the idea/ inspiration for this story?
    Answer Via Im please

    well done
    Good luck with every contest you chose to enter
    Stunning.

    B~


  • tallblondie Greeters member
    September 19

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    Thank you for entering the contest 'Novels - Your Character' - I hope the contest has helped you understand your character better.

    This profile on Emalyn is very comprehensive - it is obvious that you know your character quite well - and that is easily demonstrated in any of your chapters in your novel. She complex and dynamic - and this is what makes her real to your readers.


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ gold member
    September 11

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    Whew - it's a fake scene. *giant sigh*

    And here I was going -- #### SPOILER #### !!!!



    RJ


  • Friesian gold member
    August 17

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    Hrm...Oh, I can't think!

    Very well-thought out! I absolutely ADORE Emmy's personality and the concept of inner-struggles. Your writing is very much like the works of an accomplished adult writer- Jacquelyn Frank- whose novels also contain the genre paranormal romance. The way you weave your words together are fantastic, and to actually write about the life a high-school girl turned vampire while dealing with her own problems is amazing in itself. Excellent job!

    -Lissy

  • You have a well thought out heroine here. Your descriptions of her are very well rounded. I like her internal conflict as well as the obvious ones surrounding her in her 'situation'. She is a very believable (albiet wise for her years) teenager. Dialog was good and blieveable. Nicely done.

  • living.angel
    July 28
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    thatz kul.soz i didnt read it b4.


  • sandypr.
    July 25

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    Thats a really good idea. I mean like the whole character profile thing. I wanna steal the idea if you dont mind... =]

  • Cool!

  • Well......amusing

    Fake scene? Amusing I think. To keep readers at suspense? Very amusing.....

  • fake scene!!!! im gonna kill you soooooo hard HT!!

    And....SHE AND HE LOVE EACH OTHER I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Luke=MINE!!!!

    Skylar=a *bleep*

    Emma=Cool

  • OMG!!! what are you waiting for girly? i have to now what happens! especially after reading that! LOVE IT!! and yes i know you said it's just a spoiler but I STILL HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! keep going it's fantastic!

  • Ok you have the character sketch gairly well drawn ou


  • whatami
    June 4
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    Um. Ok. Yeah, you should extend this. It's pretty good. I don't get how Luke found out Emma was a vampire, though. Great job. Check out my new story, please?

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