candy

candy, candy all around1

would you like a mound?2

chocolaty and sweet3

all simple treat4

candy at the pound!!

what do u think?

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  • Brian Balzer
    October 9, 2008
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    I think you gave me a sweet tooth.

    Yes, I would love to eat a mound. Or would that be I love to eat mounds? I want more than that though. I want eat to different kinds. Is there anything else you can offer? I think the last line should candy by the Pound. Any way about it, this is a cute little poem. Let me know if you decide to offer more choices and I'll come back and read it again. Now I want to go eat a sweet.

  • Lost Emo
    June 23, 2008
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    i think someone has candy on the brain? lol