The Ninjateam Chonicals Book:1 It all began.... Prolog

It all began, with just a game.......1

Prolog   Tang Che woods, Japan, 19932

The mud and leaves crunched under his feet. Above him the sky was ruled by dark, grey, clouds, full of rain. He was tired, but he couldn’t stop now, he was being chased. Suddenly he came to a dead end. He cursed under his breath as he turned to meet his fate. In front of him four metal spider legs dug into the dirt. Controlling them was a old, short man with crazy grey and white hair. He spoke in a mad scientist’s voice.3

“Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Run out of room? And they call you the ninja master? If you really are, you would have escaped me by now!"4

“ Yeah,” said the ninja master out of breath, “I would like to say the same thing to you, Kon.”5

Kon scowled. “ Never mind that, now....” He pulled out a red live saver, “You will pay, unless you tell me!” 6

The ninja master backed up closer to the trees. Just as Kon brought his sword down the ninja master caught it.
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“Huh?,” 8

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  Kon tried really hard to pull his saver from the ninja master’s grip. No luck. Suddenly the ninja master jumped up, released the saver, and also unleashed a spin kick, which landed in Kon’s chest. 10

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  Kon stumbled back and popped a lazar gun out of his arm and shot 3 times. The ninja master did a back flip dogging them; His turn. The ninja master did a jump off of a tree , at the same time pulling out both of his swords. He slashed Kon about 20 times, and kick the life saver out of his hands. It hit the ground and instantly shut off. 12

Kon, looking very angry, hurdled himself towards the ninja master.13

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 BAM!! 15

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 "AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! OOOFFFH!"17

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 The ninja master flew backwards, and hit a tree. He pulled himself up. He wasn’t going to lose this fight. The ninja master  took off with a sword in each hand, towards Kon. He jumped up and moved his swords and his body together, making the most damaging moves he had ever made in his life. 19

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  Suddenly he cut off one of Kon’s spider legs. Kon looked in shock at his missing leg. Then his temper thermometer bursted. He picked up the ninja master by his legs, and flung him against a nearby tree. The ninjaa master  fell to the ground and laid still. Kon picked him up and cracked him over his knee. The ninja master dropped to the ground and laid still. Kon picked him up with one of his metal spider legs. 21

  The ninja master forced his eyes open. 22


“Now before I destroy you, tell me were the gems of the ninja sprits are!!!!”23

“I-I-I will never tell you!!”24

“THEN DIIIIIEEEEE!!!!!!”25

Kon aimed his lazers at the ninja master, who braced himself for his fate. All of a sudden, Kon let out a scream and a red light shone around him. His grip released and the ninja master dropped to the ground. He covered his eyes. 26

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 “What the...... ?” 28

He mumbled. The red light stopped, and he fell to the ground. 29

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“......Who saved my life?” 31

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  He then looked up. Holding Kon’s red live saver, was a girl, with blue eyes and brown hair, who was no younger then 2.33

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  ”What the.......?” 35

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The little girl looked up, yelped, dropped the saver, and ran. 37

“Wait!” The ninja master stood up and ran after her.38

The little girl got even more scared as the dark woods covered the dark sky. To the ninja master the little girl was getting farther and farther away. Suddenly, the little girl tripped over a rock, tumbled down a hill, and hit the tree. WACK!!! 39

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  The ninja master stopped.'41

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   Is she dead?' 43

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   He slowly approached the little girl. All of a sudden, her little blue eyes flew open. She gasped and crunched her self closer to the tree. The ninja master bent down and touched the little quivering girl. 45

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  “Awwww.......What’s such a young girl doing in such a big woods?” He paused and lifted his hand. The little girl began to quiver again.      47

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  Then suddenly a sound came from the distance......BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! The ninja master gasped. Kon’s spider legs, they were going to blow up! He stood up to leave, the stopped. 50

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 " I just can’t leave her here to die......” He mumbled. 52

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  The little girl whimpered. BOOM !!! The spider legs exploded. Fire and debree blew through the woods. All hope seemed lost. The ninja master picked up the girl and ran. The little girl yelped at the sight of the explosion coming their way. 54

They ran.... through the misting rain. The fire following at their heels. If that weren’t enough, suddenly a lightning bolt hit they fire, making it grow 10 times worse.55

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 The ninja master gasped. 57

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  Suddenly, they came to a dead end. Forgetting about the little girl, the ninja master cursed and swared under his breath the turned towards the blaze. There was only one way to escape the fire. Jump. He turned to the little girl. 59

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“Hold your breath!!!” 61

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Then he jumped, and closed his eyes. SPLASH!!! The fire reached the cliff where they were. Pieces of rock fell in, making a bigger splash the two of them. 63

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  The ninja master and the little girl bursted to the surface, then swam to the shore. It was over. The evil Kon was dead, and they both had escaped fire deaths.65

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Please forgive me. This is the very first story I wrote.

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  • EverRose
    August 11

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    gah! I forgot to put my name and the rose thingy!

    -Rose there we go, lol.

  • EverRose
    August 11
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    Lol, well I am not if it's supposed to be funny, but I just kind thought it was when the younger than two year old girl like..saved the ninja master. I really did like it though, it was entertaing. If you did some revising, and possible added a little more detail because some part I was confused on, it'd be pretty damn good! Keep on writing though! The plot is so awesome.

    Great entry and thanks for entering my contest.

  • Cool story Love the Ninja stuff!

    It could use a bit of revising and all, but great plot

    Just a a couple of things:

    Starting at P6: life saber, as opposed to 'live saver'

    Anyway, 'live' should be 'life'

    p59: 'swared' should be 'swore'

    Anyway, good luck

  • Good job, good luck, and thanks for entering!


  • Blackwings
    January 4

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    I LIke this ^.^ It's a really good fanfic on the TMNT XD Nicely done with the details and I think I'll go and read some more of it ^.^ Nicely done
    ♥ Blackwings


  • Firestar-
    August 27, 2008
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    HI JASMINE OR VARJAK PAW! KEEP GOING


  • IxLovexElphiex
    July 11, 2008
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    very interesting start!

    your grammar can use work, as can the spelling!
    but keep on writing!

    thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Just Breathe.
    June 15, 2008
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    It is true you have an..intresting start. It was a good story, but you do need to work on your grammar. Thanks for entering


  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    June 3, 2008

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    An interesting start, that's for sure. You already have ninjas, mad scientists, and 2-year-old warrior girls. If that doesn't attract some interested readers, I don't know what will! This could be a very interesting story when you're done - I don't know where you're going to take it next, but it's already interesting! You do need to work a little on your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure, though. That will get better the more you write - it always works that way. Best of luck with all of your writing, and welcome to Storywrite!

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