With those beautiful eyes

If I could see your face very minute of the day
I don't think that would be enough for the things I need to say
Its like chasing dreams that do come true
When something shines as I smile at you1

With those beautiful eyes staring back at me
Feel exhilarated into the deepest dreams
I can't bare to turn away for a moment its true
To feel everything when I am with you2

Thank the life that I have lived
All the thing I want to give
Nothing short from perfect you share
Knowing that you always care3

Taking pieces of my heart
Mending them right from the start
Together we can feel so strong
From the past I move along4

Although we have others too
You know my love is there for you
Never despair or fret at all
I am her for you, your every call5

with love filled warm
With beauties grace
Inside your mind
Is heavens place6

I want to dream sweet dreams of you
Though cannot close my eyes
For it disturbs me so
How quick time flies7

So for this moment
For ever too
I live forever
To cherish you

Author notes

Aww My baby girl you already saw some of it ^.^
So here is the rest.

You make me smile so much... God you make me laugh I swear I was about to snort coke outta my nose.

But more than anything you fill me up with so many happy feelings... warm fuzzy ones ^.^ mushy !!!

So I wrote you a poem... {I can never write enough}... To express how i feel.. although I know you already know it

Im not sure the line: Nothing short from perfect you share ... but It is meant to mean that everything you share with me fills me up with so much happiness it is hard not to beleive sometimes its a dream..but it isn't XD

I love you my girl xoxo
Don't you ever forget it
Love Blair

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣

    Simply beautiful.
    One of your best poems to date I must say.
    The emotions and the love for this girl were astounding- you took your time to put every ounch of feeling into this poem and it shows your love for her so true.

    ♣ BLAKE

  • zoralielda
    June 7
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    This is wonderful!


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    June 6

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    nicely done

    This is one of your better verses. It flows good and the reader can get into a cadence as they read through the emotions portrayed. a couple of the lines were a little rough [but then you already noticed that] although it does not detract.


  • B0b
    June 3

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    mate just the author note was enough to earn you a comment. Your girls lucky to hav someone as lovin as you


  • XxTattered WingsxX gold member
    June 3

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    Awww baby! I think it is brilliant! Yes, I had seen some of it before it was posted but what you added to it was amazing! I love you so much, it's unreal. Yes, we have others that we call our own, but a piece of my heart you will forever hold. I love reading everything your write. It is always filled with such wonderful passion. I really don't know what else to say. I'm speechless. There are so many things I want to say but... I dunno! I'm so bad with words right now. I'll just have to write you something in return to prove it! Thank you baby. This means the world to me. <3

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