Faith Soever: Profile

First section: Character Profile1

1. First Name: Faith2

2. Last Name: Soever3

3. Age: In the beginning she is 16.4

4. Gender: Female5

5. Species: Human and Elemental, being an Elemental she can control; Fire, Water, Earth, Air, and Thunder.6

6. Bodily Appearance: Standing at 5'6", she stares with aquamarine eyes and her hair is dirty blonde. She has a slim body because she helps her father out on the farm. You can say athletic but no six pack. She has a scar on her right index finger from a promise cut. During her journey she gains more scars on her body. 7

7. Origin: Faith Soever grew up in Hazel Town of Aydest on a farm. She lived with both of her parents and her brother. Through out the years, Faith always felt as the odd ball. She would never hang out with the other town girls and would stick to herself and her brother. When Faith was born, she showed an unusual activity by having her iris turn into a ruby. Her parents didn't know much about it, but they had a vague idea. As she grew up she grew more attached to her family, until her father grew sick and her journey began.8

8. Love Interest's: Faith has no love interest. At least not now. 9

9. Likes & Dislikes: Faith likes to be in the farm and conversing with the animals. She also likes to go fishing, hanging out with her brother, reading, writing, and table shopping. (Like window shopping but they had no stores it's on tables)She loves to go to Dyami's house and listen to him make up stories on the spot. 10

What she dislikes is people who are bully's. In this case a group with a leader names Jeres. She also dislikes letting people down. 11

10: Virtues: Faith listens to what everyone has to say. She thinks that everyone's plans together will make a better one. She is a caring person and puts love over fighting. Thinks quickly on her feet. 12

11. Vices: When she has to, she will beat the crap out of someone. Sometimes acts before she thinks. 13

12. Ambition/Desire: To save her parents at first, but after she decided to bring down the King before he kills her. 14

13. Conflict: Her major conflict is with the King who wants to kill her because she is an Elemental. Her minor conflicts are for Jeres in a beginning chapter and then with minions of the King. 15

14. Vocation/Calling: She doesn't really have a calling. She just wants to have her parents back. But as she goes on her journey her heritage accuired from members thousands of years ago has her go and rebel against the King.16

15. Additional Notes: Faith will rather try and save people then fight them. Until she is forced to act. 17

Second section: A sample scene (100 - 400 words)18

Faith stood under a tree, a book in her hand, a page turned half way. She looked up and saw Jeres, a boy her age, walk up to her.
"Don't you have a dorm blondie?" asked Jeres. He snickered as is group walked behind him.
Faith looked up and shook her head. "Mind your business Jeres."
The boy looked around and started laughing. "Your brother isn't here to help save you is he?" He and the group started laughing. At least they thought they were scaring her.
Faith calmly closed the book and got up. She tied her hair into a ponytail and started walking towards the group. "Listen here. I don't need my brother to kick your ass. So leave me the hell alone!" she screamed. People around the campus began looking at her.
"You think you can talk to me like that you little bit-" but Jeres was cut short. Faith flung herself at him and started bunching every inch of her body she could lay her fists on. Barely a minute had passed when a teacher broke up the fight.
"Ms. Soever, come with me," she said. Faith looked at her, grabbed her book, and followed.19

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Third Section: A link to your story21

http://storywrite.com/story/16565422

That's Chapter II. It's not edited so sorry about the blehness. 23