What I Wanted

It was cold that night, so cold, in fact, that my nipples had become aroused, still being young this was a relatively new experience for me. I decided that more than just my panties and a long t-shirt was needed to stay warm, so I hopped up from the bed to open my closet. As I was crossing my room I saw a figure standing in the darkness outside my window. Out of curiosity, I crept forward to investigate. There stood a woman who was tall and pale, with almost blue skin, long legs and large full breasts. Just the sight of her began to stir something within me.1

She was wearing a long black cloak that barely covered her tight black cocktail dress, which left little to my imagination. Flowing, white hair hung down over the back of her cloak. Strangely, I began to wonder how tight her ass must  have been but I quickly told myself that this was a woman and such thoughts were silly. However, I was greatly disappointed that I couldn't clearly see her face. I had always been a sucker for eyes, male or female.2

Then I realized that I had become so captivated with this woman's beauty, that my mind had completely ignored the fact that she was standing in my front yard. I mean, she was a complete stranger and we were yards apart. Suddenly, she darted towards the front door. My heart began to race with fear and anticipation. Why was she doing this? Was she coming for me or for my parents?3

I observed her fly in through the door, my father must have forgotten to lock it again. I froze with fear. What was going on? I asked myself again and again. Suddenly, I heard someone flying up the stairs, I ran for the door to make a break for my parents room but as I grasped the knob the door flew open in my face. I fell onto my back in front of the door way.4

There she was, the most erotic and terrifying figure I had ever laid eyes upon, and she was standing before me. I could finally see her face but more specifically her eyes. They were blood red and pierced me like a knife. My heart was beating rapidly but it wasn't alone. I suddenly noticed that my panties had become intensely damp., but why?
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As she moved closer I had less time to think about my unexplainable arousal, all I could do was slowly crawl backwards toward my bed. Then, with great agility, the woman sprang at me, scooped me up, tossed me to the bed, and positioned herself abovemy frail, young body.6

I felt my young pussy become even more wet. My nipples grew harder than they had ever been before while under a chill. What was going on? She leaned in closer and pulled my t-shirt over my head, exposing my young white breasts to the world. I felt a sudden chill of my nipples which led me to becoming even more aroused.7

"Why?" I manged to squeak out.8

"Because you are the one I've been searching for," the woman said in a calm, cool voice which sent shivers down my spine.9

"Me?! No!" Her fingers quickly and gently silenced my lips. After that chore was done they began to trail down my chest, across my sternum and between my breasts. She did this with such a light tough that it could barely be felt, but it had awoken something in me that I had never felt before. I wanted her.10

Her fingers made their way down my stomach and over the mound which my panties covered. They slowly crept between my thighs and over top of my pussy lips. She forced them downward and began to fiercely rub my clit and, almost, in sync with this action, her lips descended to my left breast and proceeded to tease my nipple without mercy. 11

I was in total ecstasy. This feeling was unbelievable, my hips began to buck in an approval. I had to contain my moaning so as not to wake my parents. Imagine, I was trying not to alert my parents to the presence of a stranger in our home.12

This woman had a look of passion in her eye and mine become locked with hers as I watched her suck at my tits. She was moving between the two to maximize my pleasure. Then, when I felt as if I was about to burst, she lifted herself from my helpless body and ripped her cloak and dress right off.13

Her breasts were even bigger than my mothers, which was quite a feat, and at that moment I became obsessed with them. I had to have them. Without waiting for a sign to proceed I darted at them, instantly engorging myself within them. I began to suck at her nipples with all the enthusiasm of a new born baby. I wanted her so badly. 14

Needless to say that my juices were dripping all down my thighs, legs, and sheets. My thighs were rapidly humping her legs as I simulated a half-starved breast-feeding.15

It hurt, more than anything else I'd ever felt before. I didn't even realize what had happened at first, only that my neck felt as if it were on fire. Everything went cold, but not temperature wise. It was like all of the positive energy had made an exodus from my heart and soul. I fell backwards on the bed, blood flowing my neck. The face of my new lover now had a scarlet tint to it. This is what I wanted.16


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  • Violette silver member
    April 15
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    Words have no meaning in comparison.

    Enough said.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    June 12, 2008

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    Well to be frank it was quiet a read... I am tossed between saying that it was so fast paced and full on that I wasnt sure what to do...but the language was quiet different to the bondage or sensual stories I am used to reading and writing

    But at the same Time I was heaving, moanign crying almost because it was so delish and It was almost like a drug that I wanted inside of me floing through my body.

    BUT one: you did not read my rules

    So Im iffy
    fix it up & Ill see what I can do


    • EasytoForget
      June 16, 2008
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      thanks but I got what I wanted........yourcomment was wonderful


  • Melody C
    June 12, 2008
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    plez read contest rules


  • erasmuss
    June 8, 2008
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    It was interesting. I'm not a big fan of lesbian erotica, and I found a little of your word use to....blunt for my liking. It moves a little fast as well, but I did quite enjoy it.
    My advise is to find words to substitute for things like "pussy" and "hump". Like...grind?
    Otherwise, it wasnt oo bad.


  • Reaver Greeters member
    June 4, 2008

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    This was good. Run-on's throughout and occational tense confusion, but enjoyable. Thanks fore entering.

  • dontbelong
    June 3, 2008
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    Amazing..that's all I can say


  • YaoiQueen Killa
    June 3, 2008

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    Hehehhehe

    I dont care what Damian says, Homoerotica is my fortai, I adored your desciptive words, it flowed wonderfully and you might have a chance of winning this
    No complaints, though the vampire couldve said a few more things


  • Swords of Ireland
    June 2, 2008

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    Not my type sorry, not a fan of Homosexuality, sorry, no affense though. just not my type of tale.

    Damian


  • B0b
    June 2, 2008
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    OMG... I was so wrapt in that. I didnt want it to end


  • iBubbles
    June 2, 2008

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    intersting. this was the first lesbian story ive ever heard, but i found it really good. keep writing :]

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