The rain beat humdrum on the moonlit streets,the clouds covering up the murky sky.You walked along, smiling as the rain trickled down the collar of your coat and down to my spine.Your hair dripping with the fresh falling rain drops.You carry on walking not caring who is your path, into you get to the old run down church.You turn and look behind to see if any one is watching then walk into the church.You sit down and stare around the old church, you remove your heavy jacket and place it on the floor.1
I walk slowly behind you, being careful not to make a sound.I place my cold lips upon your neck and slowly begin to kiss you, you sharply turn around and your emerald eyes stare back at me you try to talk but i press my lips against yours and begin to remove your soaking wet shirt, you shiver with the coldness but carry on kissing me back.You push me down upon the cold stone fall and begin to remove the lace from my satin corset, you tug it off and press your wet body against mine, you kiss down my body to you get to my stomach you slowly start to undo the buttons on my jeans and then you swiftly rip them off.You begin to caress my inner thigh until i start becoming wet.You force my hands behind my head.You slowly enter your fingers into me, exploring the insides of me and penetrating me, you carry on and smile when you here me moan with pleasure, you get faster and faster but keep stopping and teasing me, you carry on until my whole body tingles and my body begins to shake.You smile and grab me in your arms,i run my hands through your wet hair and breath deeply on your neck, you smile with the pleasure that you have pleasured me, and over and over again we seem to explore each others bodies until the sun begins rising and shone through the glass panels.i grabbed you once more and kissed your soft skin, and i smiled one last time as i walked out the church.2
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Whoa! a church, risky yet kinky, lol. Longer than your last but still just as hot, excellent write! glad you entered both of them
*Joe*
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yer thats a kool idea im up for it
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Hehe, I like this one a lot better. It's cool, and You know I love churches and the rain... I have an idea though; one of us should start a story, and then through comments carry on the story with each of us taking turns. we could have a really cool and erotic long story... What do you think?
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Sex in a church?! How skandolous, but actually hot. Really hot. Very intriguing write. I agree with DragonChild tho, she left with no pants? That seems a bit odd...the only suggestion I have is breakup that BIG paragraph and use something other than "you" that is overly used. You do this you do that you made me feel like this etc.etc.etc. you need to use a different word stratigically in different places to shake it up a bit. Great Read, though.
XoXo
NiKKi -
Erotic writing, and with a strange taboo being in the church. The image is fascinating and hot. I like the initial sexual interaction, then leaving more for imagination.. good. B
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Heh, definatly like the idea of this ... love the imagery of them coming out of the rain and into this abandon little church. And people wearing corsets is always a plus
Really nice read.
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