Harry and You

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Name: use yours3

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House: Ravenclaw5

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Best Friend: The Golden Trio and most of the Ravenclaw7

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Person you Hate: Cho Chang9

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Personality: Beautiful, super smart, friendly, and a little shy11

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You were having one of the worst days of your life. 15

At breakfast, you spilled pumpkin juice all over the new robe your mom sent you for your birthday. Later, on your way to Astrology you bumped into Malfoy. 'filthy mudblood' you heard him mutter before shoving you into a hard object. That object just happened to have raven hair with a pair of emerald eyes. 16

Those eyes had a fleeting look of surprise before he moved to help you up. You could still remember the way you stuttered a thank you before grabbing your now scattered papers and sprinting down the corridor and out to the castle grounds.17

Your feet carried you to one of your favorite spots along the Black Lake that you liked to share with Hermione and Luna while studing. Normaly you would be completly against ditching, but you had to get some air.18

All the events of the school day must have taken it's toll on you, because in about five minutes, you were fast asleep, with your back against the large tree trunk. The leftover rays from the sinking sun collabrated to highlight your angelic features.19

You were a natural beauty with long brown hair and matching puppy dog brown eyes. Your high cheekbones accented your nose to perfection. Youv'e been known to have adjectives such as hot,beautiful,and even sexy thrown at you from most of the guys. Only one guy described you as great friend. Unfortunatly for you that was the person you ached for to feel that way. Harry Potter was one of the few close friends that you valued too much to jepordize. Better to have him as a friend than nothing at all...right?20

You continued in your doze until you felt a few drops of water fly into your half parted mouth. You gave a few coughs before opening one eye. You spotted a raven haired boy a few meters away skipping rocks. The splashes washed over your face this time, making you gag. Harry turned you.21

" Oh, so your awake." he said with a half smile.22

" Yeah, I guess I am." you replied while wiping your face with one of your sleeves. You patted the space beside you after making room. He gave a nod before sitting down on one of the tree roots.23

" You didn't look so good when you ran into me earlier. Are you alright?" he asked with genuine concern.24

" Yeah. Just having a bad day, that's all." 25

" Do you need a hug? I'm here if you do." he asked recieving a laugh from you. You went silent for a while pondering on weather that was a genuine offer or not.26

" What about a kiss then?" he whispered almost to low for you to hear.27

You didn't take any head to his closeness, until is face was inches from yours. 28

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"Harry.... why are-" but you were cut off by his warm and delicious lips on yours. You immediatly relaxed into the kiss and placed your hands on his chest. It was perfectly toned from quittich and made him moan into the kiss as you rubbed your hands against it. He licked your bottom lip asking, no begging for entrance. You gladly accepted as you felt his tounge begin to massage yours. Three seconds later, you were forced to break free from each other because the laws of nature state that humans need oxygen to breath. Both of you panting heavily, you wondered what it meant. All of the bottled up emotions were set free in that one kiss. 30

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"______?" Harry asked still trying to catch his breath. 32

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"Yes Harry?" you answered in a sort of daze. The kiss had been shear bliss. No one had ever kissed you like that before, and you were sure that you didn't want anyone other than Harry to try. 34

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"I have liked you since the beginning of fourth year and I think that I may even be falling in love with you..." he trailed off looking at the sunset again. 36

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" I feel exactly the same way." you said snuggling up to him and placing your head on his chest as he began to twril a finger through your hair. 38

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"Will you be my girfriend____?" Harry asked looking into your big brown eyes. " Yes Harry," you said softly before he lost you in another one of his amazing kisses. Maybe this wasn't the worst day after all....40

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Just a OC fanfic i felt like writing. Hope you liked it!

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  • sugarrrainbow
    June 1, 2008

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    This is a classic write. I have seen the "you" in the Harry Potter fanfiction theme many times.
    You have a lot of potential, your writing is good, yet immature. It just lacks the experience of a writer that has been writing fanfiction for a long time.
    However I am glad that the "you" HP fic isn't dead! I even wrote one myself back in the day when I first started.
    Good job and good luck!