The wind hit my face, a cool breeze added to the beautiful day. Summer was near end but the cool breeze stayed the same as the blue sky turned was still bright as the start of summer.1
I wish this summer never ends I thought to my self as I embraced the weather.2
Destiny woke me this morning. For some reason I had to look my best after hours of deciding what to wear I finally decided. I chose a long black top that was up to my knees. The top read in gold ‘I bought sexy back!’
With the top combined plain black leggings with black pumps which made me seem a bit taller.3
I smiled as people looked my way and guys winked, I didn’t look back as I was rushing to meet my best friend.
Carrie and I had an argument a few weeks ago mostly about her new ‘friends’. I didn’t want her to mix with the wrong crowd mainly after her father’s death 3 months ago.
She wanted to make it up to me so we both decided to meet for lunch.4
I got to the café and realized she wasn’t there so I looked around but couldn’t find her. I pulled a chair ad sat down while continually looking around. These past few weeks she started to become late for everything school, work even shopping so I decided to wait for a few moments.5
After a while the waitress came.
‘Hello and welcome to charms restaurant are you ready to order?’ the blonde waitress asked in her fakest smile and tone.
Thank god I’m not blonde I thought to myself6
‘Sorry but I’m waiting for someone’ I replied without no facial expressions I couldn’t bother to be nice as I had been stood up by my so called best friend but for some reason, my ass wanted to wait.
The waitress smiled then rolled her eyes and walked off, I could hear her cursing.
Bitch! I thought to myself.7
I picked my bag from the table and searched for my phone.
I opened it up and speed dialed Carrie’s number, it rang for awhile then she picked it up.8
‘Hello…’ A sleepy voice answered and I couldn’t believe it she was asleep at 14:10. I snapped.9
‘I cannot believe you’re asleep while I’m waiting out here for you like an idiot!’ I shouted and suddenly everyone was staring at me, I blushed furiously but ignored their shocked faces and whispering. I bet they thought I was talking to my boyfriend.10
‘I am so sorry babe, I totally forgot’ Carrie said lamely with a long yawn, this was enough for me.11
‘Sorry, babe...’ I repeated as I felt staring eyes at me.12
‘Fuck you! You and I are done…FINISHED’ I shouted at her through the phone, I then hung up on her before she could say anything else. I grabbed my bag as the people started to whispers between themselves.13
I felt sick and I couldn’t believe she let me down …. Again
I didn’t understand why I was so surprised because it wasn’t the first time. She was meant to be my friend and I knew I had to stand by her but I had to let her go, she lost heronly true friend
, as I crossed the streets to get to the car park I felt like I was going to cry so I ran to hold back the tears.
As soon as I got to the car someone called my name but I chose to ignore it, I opened the door to my dads Mercedes someone yelled out my name.14
‘Hannah!’ it was a man’s voice which sounded really familiar, I turned around to find Justin waving like an idiot. He ran towards me fast trying to dodge the children that came out of McDonalds.15
‘Hey!’ Justin said breathless, I started to wonder to myself why did he run that fast. He waved his hand across my face as I started to fall into a long daydream, I shooked my head as I looked at him.16
‘Man, I ran that fast and you can’t even pay attention’ Justin sighed17
‘I’m sorry, I dropped into wonderland’ I giggled and looked into his eyes. I noticed that they were watery green; I always thought they were brown.18
‘Yeah, I also see you dropped into sexy land…. Awesome’ he spoke in the flirtiest tone and winked, this made me burn red.19
‘Back of Justin’ I said playfully.20
‘Sorry forgot you’re dating Timothy’ Justin answered with a low tone, I guess he was upset. I hadn’t thought about Tim at all after our huge argument, I thought it was all over.21
‘Don’t be sorry, anyways I don’t even know if we’re dating it’s has been awhile…’ I paused to think about Justin and why I was so interested in him.22
‘Wow!’ Justin said in amazement his green eyes were wide so I checked to look behind me but there was nothing and nobody there so I was confused now.23
‘Wow… what?’ I spoke with one of my eyebrows up.24
‘You’re a nympho… Tim must be tired’ Justin winked, after he said ‘nympho’ I understood what he was talking about sex.
I couldn’t understand how boys turned the conversation into sex so quickly. I laughed at him.25
‘I didn’t mean sex I meant we haven’t talked for awhile ….idiot!’ I laughed at him more, I could see he was getting embarrassed so I decided to stop laughing and end this conversation.26
‘Anyways I have to get going, it was really nice talking to you’ I said and turned around to open the cars door for the second time, my heart was hurting me for some reason. I didn’t want to leave but I also didn’t want him to think I liked him.
As I sat in the car, I looked to find Justin still stood there and staring at my window. I lowered the window down and stared back into his eyes as he watched me.
I gave him a smile which made him open his mouth I didn’t know what he would say next could change my whole life.27
‘Hannah.... I love you’ he spoke so simply, he said it with such love and desire which left me staring back with my mouth open.
He turned around and walked off, he didn’t walk fast then again he didn’t walk slow either….
Author notes
Meet Hannah...
Something I wrote last night and re-edited it this morning, just making it longer and changing the names.
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Kind of confusing, actually...this story was a little hard to follow, and the grammar was off. The plot was good, but it was under-written (is that a word?) and it left me with (too many!) questions and not enough answers. There was little to no backstory which added to the confusion. The characters were funny, though, so the humor was pretty good.
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i liked it
it waz really great if i were a person like that i would luv it!!!!!!!!!! -
Nice, I do hope that you're going to continue it, that was good, just a normal, everyday story.
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Huh... more story!!!
I like this, but I would really like to know more about the characters... Why is Hannah yelling at her? Seems a little childish and why does Tim affect her so much? These questions answered will make me want more and more.
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ZOMG I REALLY LOVED THIS...and loves your background as well ^.^ this was packed with creativity Xd I loved the characters and the dialogue and to me it ran smoothly for an exjoyable read XD well done ^.^
Blair

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Cool, easy to relate to.
I like how much development of charactor you have in so few lines. Well done.
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