Love,
A simple emotion.
Beautiful but deadly,
Like the Earth`s Ocean.1
Brings us together,
Tears us apart.
Like twine and leather,
Torn from my heart.2
A mirror without reflection,
Is just silver.
Human without affection,
Is just animal.3
A gift to give,
Love can be fun.
Until you must forgive,
For what they have done.4
They took your breath,
Then stabbed your back.
Love ends in death,
It is human lack.5
Lack to love,
For better and through worse.
Think of a dove,
Plagued with fate and curse.6
You`ve got to wonder,
Why love?
Well we live under,
But we think above.7
So we play this game,
Love and life.
Until we can claim,
A bloody knife.8
Love,
A simple emotion.
Beautiful but deadly,
For lack of better devotion.
Author notes
Don`t generally write about love. Enjoy anyways.
In a list
A contest entry
- Too Late to Turn Back Now by trackrunnengirl24.
107 points, ended July 13, 2008, 7 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Love hurts. by Yoko.
105 points, ended June 14, 2008, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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That was so nice. Nicly written. I love the ending and beggining the most. How you repeated the first three lines and changed the fourth line. So sad. Poems are so nice, (only if I don't write one.)
Loved this. Keep writing. Hehe, mew!
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I liked it
It was neat. I overall like it. Too bad I don't like love poems.....

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That was AMAZING!!!
Wow!
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lol thanks
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i really like this poem !!!! its So beautiful !!!!
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thank you
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i really like this poem !!!!! its so beautiful !!!!
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shit i forgot the t in lot !!!!
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i like this poem a lo
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wow. that was really good! good luck and thanks for entering!
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ooh!
Incredible. This was very well written. It had a powerful emotional aura. I enjoyed it fully! Good job!

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