i was walking alone that very night all alone silenty through the central park, it must have been around 2:15am.I needed some air need to explore the world when everyone else was sleep.walking along feeling the wind run in and out through my loose hair.i walked and stood on the bridge that crossed the small flowing stream,suddenly i felt a splash on my face and i looked up, it had started to rain.i giggled as another drop splashed againest my smooth white skin, looking around noone was there so i stripped down to my underwear and began to spin slowy in the pouring rain, suddenly i stopped and there you were a dark shadow, leaning againest the great oak tree.You moved slowy towards me, your hair dripping and swaying softly in the wind, your firm hand gripped my face and stared deeply into my pleading eyes, i went to ask who you were but you put you hand across my mouth and started to slowy kiss and tease my neck, i pulled you closer and began to undo you shirt the rain pounding againest us hardly made me want you more.The rain splashed againest your face and down your chest.You lay me on the wet grass and undid my bra you watched as the ice rain dripped down my breast and ran down my stomach,you began to lick the salty water off and next you pulled off my thongs and watched again as the water trickled down me and down below, you gripsed me tightly and began to slowy lick my wet pussy, your tongue getting faster as the rain pounds harder, you heard me moaning so you licked faster and harder, you hear me moan with pleasure as i slowy orgasim, you get up and kiss me on the lips i can feel the wet saltiness of your tongue and lips, i run my hands through your damp hair and beg you not to go, but you kiss my hand and disapper into the moons shadow, leaving me wanting more and extremly happy in the pouring rain.1
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Why did he have to go so soon?
This is interesting, how it came to be i'd like to know. Great write glad you entered!
*Joe*
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Nice vision of erotica, very sensuous. From both perspectives.. wetness adds a sexiness. Good.
Bennett -
hmmmmmmmm this would be a really good story, one if you drug it out more, and if you fixed all your errors. There are tense, spelling and gramtical errors. Also, it shouldn't all be one big paragraph...if you need help fixing anything, just IM me. I'm a typo/editing NAZI! lol...just im me, okay?
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NiKKi
