Wine-O2

'no worries love', a voice from above called down. 'what?' i called. 'love they approach grab my hand' a male voice called, i did'nt think as his hand appeared i just grabed. i was pulled from the ground just as the things rounded the corner into the alley i was just pulled from. 'where did she gooooooo?' one of them hissed. now i was really scared, they were standing right below. the voice called into my ear, 'quiet now love make no sudden movements or they may hear'. he drew me back from the ledge guiding me. i had no reason to trust this man but he had saved my life. we made our way towards the other side and climbed down. ' what is ya name dearie?' he asked. 'shay' i replied, 'well i am wine-o your gallant night at your service.' 'ttt-thank you for your help' i stuttered, because we were now in the light and he was gorgeous. not that i was'nt hot just that he reminded me of one of the fallen angels from my fathers paintings.

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Hm...too many typos, etc. You can just copy paste it all into MS Word, or something, an it'll catch most of them for you. That would be faster than my spelling each of them out for you.



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    • ainshbu
      June 21, 2008
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      umm yeah, i luv your picture thing i got one "i have light skin so i must be biracial" i hate stereotypes