Prince Caspian

“Natalie, Kathryn, how much longer do he have, until this lesson is over?” I grumbled. They glanced at me knowing if Doctor Cornelius caught us we would have a “stern’ talking to. I looked longingly out the castle window waiting for Cornelius to say we were done. My brother Caspian was sitting in a parliament discussing who knows what with uncle. He and I looked very much the same, with black hair, brown black eyes and tan skin. But I’m a girl. My cousin Kathryn looks like me except shorter, and Natalie had very ice brown hair with amber eyes and stood at my height Natalie was an old family friend and her mother sent her to live with us because there family was falling apart. Kathryn was living with us because her uncle was the ruling king. He was a cruel man. He didn’t care about her, or me or Natalie. He had dark clod eyes and all his features were evil. I stared to stare out the window and slowly dozed off. I awoke with a start as the doors closed. “Does that mean lessons are over?” I exclaimed. “Yes!” Kathryn and Natalie shouted back. I got up and raced outside. I stared to laugh and sing and jump around. I was at last 16. Natalie and Kathryn stared to dance with me and we were having the best time, until uncle came along. He glared at us and stared swearing. I knew why, because I could finally go to parliament. Being the first girl in a long line of men, I was mistreated. That did not bother me one bit. As I was dancing Caspian walked out and stared at us. “Why are you all dancing?” he said sound truly perplexed. “Because as of right now on this very day I AM NOW 16!” I shouted in reply. I laughed wildly. Kathryn and Natalie looked at me with concern. “Rose are you okay?” they both asked. But I could not answer for I was too filled with joy. At last I could actually spend time with my brother.

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My moms computer is acting all screwy so I will continue this tumorrow NATALILE OS UR NARNINA FANFIC OR ELSE

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  • LuckyBlackCat
    June 3, 2008

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    nice job. yay! i love how you included me!!! Yay! i'll talk to you tomorrow, or evne today maybe..... also, add me as a author! Pleeeeeeeease?!


  • SayNope2Dopex14
    June 1, 2008

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    Coolio kiddo. Wrote mine now finish this because I wanna read a fanfic by my friends for once instead of write it.


  • riasme
    May 31, 2008
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    neato!! i love the story idea. write moar >:0