What Has Happened To Us

A regret is one,1

That someone makes for a loved one.2

Regret meaning they are sorry for what they have done,3

To only that ceratin loved one.4

It is now time I set my foot,5

And say I am sorry.6

Sorry for whatever I have done, 7

Or whatever will be done.8

The mistake is mine, and i hope you see,9

Your still a great older brother to me.

i tried to rhyme and make sence. yes, this is to a certain person, though i thought it would be better to write it in a poem.

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  • XxSkyTheRainbowxX
    July 27, 2008

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    OMG O.O!!!!!!!!!!! lolz diz remindz me of ma ex bf
    but how cares huh!!!! lolz its kinda fun bing single sumtimes
    lolz but im free!!!!!!!
    luv,sky xoxo


  • Brijee.
    June 6, 2008
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    Its Cool.

    :]


  • zoralielda
    June 4, 2008

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    Good, but in the wrong place

    The poem's good. very good. But you should have sent it at allpoetry.com
    apart from that really cool