.My fridge and me


I’m in the kitchen ah.1

Are you with me so far2

The kitchen.3

Anyways I open the door see4

Oh ya to the fridge ah5

Ya me and fridge we been together a long time ah6

Gosh, were was I now7

Ah, oh ya I opened the door8

Gee! The light came on ah9

So I’m looking ah10

In the fridge11

Well I see a can of sardines in there12

They been there a while13

Well better leave them alone ah14

In the back there a big jar of pickle ah15

Garlic too I like that ah16

Let’s see now on the side there some lettuce17

Yikes,in the front there left over potatoes ah18

Well fridge I’m starting to get a little hungry here ah19

Ya,ya, I think what’s in order here ha20

Is some fridgearater stew21

Let's see now22

I’ll need the fry pan ah23

Half to start out with a spoon of butter24

And warm up that pan ah25

We’ll put some of them there potatoes in there26

There’s cheese there some of that ah27

Maybe one of those pickles out of the back there28

I’ll cut that up ah.29

Top it off there with them sardine.30

Can’t be all bad ah31

Get that stuffed in my gut ah32

Licking my chop.33

Then I get up from table ah34

And go to the fridge 35

Ya me and my fridge bin together a long time ah36

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  • Elisabeth gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    This is very funny John! I loved the different way that you wrote it. It suits it. Great originality.

    Lis

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  • Caterell
    May 30, 2008

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    Good

    Interesting! I like the idea with the fridge, and it's descriptive. It sounds like you're hungry LOL! Or is the character suffering from an eating disorder? It's certainly original!