I’m in the kitchen ah.1
Are you with me so far2
The kitchen.3
Anyways I open the door see4
Oh ya to the fridge ah5
Ya me and fridge we been together a long time ah6
Gosh, were was I now7
Ah, oh ya I opened the door8
Gee! The light came on ah9
So I’m looking ah10
In the fridge11
Well I see a can of sardines in there12
They been there a while13
Well better leave them alone ah14
In the back there a big jar of pickle ah15
Garlic too I like that ah16
Let’s see now on the side there some lettuce17
Yikes,in the front there left over potatoes ah18
Well fridge I’m starting to get a little hungry here ah19
Ya,ya, I think what’s in order here ha20
Is some fridgearater stew21
Let's see now22
I’ll need the fry pan ah23
Half to start out with a spoon of butter24
And warm up that pan ah25
We’ll put some of them there potatoes in there26
There’s cheese there some of that ah27
Maybe one of those pickles out of the back there28
I’ll cut that up ah.29
Top it off there with them sardine.30
Can’t be all bad ah31
Get that stuffed in my gut ah32
Licking my chop.33
Then I get up from table ah34
And go to the fridge 35
Ya me and my fridge bin together a long time ah36
Comments
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This is very funny John!
I loved the different way that you wrote it. It suits it. Great originality.
Lis

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Good
Interesting! I like the idea with the fridge, and it's descriptive. It sounds like you're hungry LOL! Or is the character suffering from an eating disorder? It's certainly original!

