Dumont loved,and he promised to marry me if I gave him a child.When I was desperate for medication when my baby was sick I became a prostitute.I came across this man said that he will help me make more money.He called me " chocolate because my body was so dark and sexy.1
My high school boyfriend Dumont told me that he loved me and he made feel so good from head to toe. He told everybody what was I like in bed and the noises that I made,and they wanted their piece of my pie.My heart was torn into shreds that the man that I love could treat me like this. Well I felt so hurt inside and had sex with any man that said that they loved me.My mom did the same thing to my dad,and he ran off with my Science teacher who was the slut of the school,and the male teaches from each of my classes liked my mother so much that they put her number on their speed dial on their cell phone.Many guys that are in my class bark at me at me when I walk pass them, and some asked "when are they going to have a turn?" I wanted to tell them that I am not like my mother,but they turned around and said we did it to your mother last night,and they did to her one by one,and never stopped till morning.Through all this my reputation had been damaged and and burned. 2
A contest entry
- Can you fill the gap? by Melancholic Smile.
500 points, ended June 5, 2008, 4 entries
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Comments
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This is a good piece of writing it just seems too short, I dont know if you were planning on coming back and expanding it or not. Had it been longer it could be a really good story. Thanks for entering!

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Very nice. Please expand on it when you get the chance. If you feel like it. This can be one amazing story!


