Bang (Hit the Wall)

Shoot 'em up, beat 'em down.
Do whatever I can to get the fuck out.
Ya'll do nothin' but lay around.
Lie cheat and steal, yeah, that's what your about.1

Country's in trouble?
Give the poor a gun,
Ship 'em off to war.
There... it's done!2

Year after year, its all the same.
Just new faces, place, but all the games.
Lock and load, let's hit the road.
Let's show them how its done.3

(Let's end it all)
Bang! We've hit the wall.
Dead end, dead men, and exploding cars.
Wasting ammo on this useless shit.
Looks like none the two will never quit.4

Bang! Looks like were starting again.
Bringin' our bombs and singin' our songs.
Endless chaos, dismembered arms.
Single moms with their broken hearts.5

All this war, I just don't know
if we can step out the fuckin' door.
Hand grenades blowing at every turn.
I think it's time to
End
It
All6

Can't you see the forest trough the trees?
Can't you see the beauty through the leaves?
Open up your eyes
and just put everything like
It
Used
to
Be7

(Let's end it all)
Bang! We've hit the wall.
Dead end, dead men, and exploding cars.
Wasting ammo on this useless shit.
Looks like none the two will never quit.8

Let's end it all

Author notes

I wrote these lyrics randomly after listening to LP's Bleed It Out

I plan on making this a song for my band, so for the sake of my sanity, please, no stealing...

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  • kitty ROSE
    June 9
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    Pretty good =D


  • RockerGirl123
    June 5
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    That was awesome! I like it...if you have a rock band, that could be very cool!


  • Lady Selena
    June 2

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    Anoymized, you like read my mind. I was thinking the same thing when I read this.
    It was good, many..swears, But I'm over 13 so big whup eh?
    Great job and thanks for entering


  • lexiconsthedevil
    May 29

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    as i was reading this i thought it sounded a lot like LP and then i read your notes and i knew it! tha tis so cool they are one of my favorite bands. this is really good too. good luck in the contest!


  • the shorty
    May 28

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    Interesting... I really could feel the emotion, and I think it addresses an important issue. Nice job.


  • SympatheticMisery
    May 28
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    That was really good, Armando n.n
    It's pretty much what's happening in Iraq right now; not only that, but also what happened in Vietnam, aswell as several other wars. The meaning was very deep, and I thought it was a beautiful piece. I'd love to hear your band play it! n.n


    • Envy The Sin
      May 29
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      That songs gonna be a very "Bleed it Out/ Linkin Park" type song, very rock-rap-ish...

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