So Alive

Ever since I told you, "I hate you!"1

We became...2

So alive, we can't get enough.3

So crazy, we are killing each other.4

So wrong, we just don't care.5

So right, we make love.6

So fast, we want to fall apart.7

So wild, we threw up on a stranger.8

So drunk, we sang Scooby-dooby-doo, where are you.9

So free, we want to run away.10

When will the time comes when we get there?11

To the place where we dreamed of.12

It's your fault I can't get enough of you, you old fart!

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  • werner1221
    July 14, 2008
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    haha. scooby dooby doo.
    classic xD

    sounds like nothin but fun times.


  • Amicus2K9
    July 2, 2008

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    Old Fart?

    ...did somebody call my name? A strange mixture of oil and water here, the proud and the profane and confused. But then, thas what being 17 will getcha, after five daughters going from 17 to 30 overnight, or was it 13 to 30?

    Thank you for the visit....

    old fart...


  • hocochick08
    July 2, 2008

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    Haha. This is cute!
    It really reminds me of a couple are really close
    I like how you showed humor and love at the same time. The words were simple and understandable.
    I like it!


  • Evil-Beach
    July 1, 2008
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    okay!!


  • IGWooten
    May 28, 2008

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    LOL

    loved it! humorous and profound at the same time. You described being in love passionately in fine simplistic style.
    Good job!
    Keep on writing!
    Sincerely,
    IGW

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