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  • Missi
    May 28, 2008
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    TOMORROW IS THE JUDGING DAY SO FINISH BY TONIGHT!

  • Missi
    May 27, 2008

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    Your Prompt is:
    This poem is called: I Was Given

    I was given a heart
    Only to love you
    I was given eyes
    Only to see you1

    Never did I imagine
    This would be my state
    In love2

    Why do I get the feeling
    That although the mood has changed
    My heart is untouched3

    What stage of love is this?
    Where I find no peace
    Even for a moment4

    The lanes where we fell in love
    The cities of our dreams
    Everywhere I look
    I only see you5

    I can't help my feelings
    You are the one I have given
    My heart and soul to6

    It's tough for me to
    Live without you7

    I breathe
    Only to love you8

    I have been given eyes
    Only to see you...

    { YOU WILL HAVE TO FINSIH THIS REALLY FAST AS THE DEADLINE IS IN TWO DAYS!}