“What?!” I practically shouted into my phone. My dad rushed into the room asking if I was ok. I nodded and waved him out of my room. “You can’t do this to me,” I told Connor after my dad was out of sight. “It’s been 3 months and you’ve just decided to end it now?!”1
“Look,” he said. “I just don’t think it’ll work out any more between us. I’ve decided to…” I didn’t want to hear anymore so I hung up.2
A guy CANNOT break up over the phone. It’s just not right.3
I tilted my head back, not wanting to cry. But the tears fell from my eyes as I collapsed onto the bed. That night, I cried myself to sleep while hugging my pillow. 4
It was probably the only time I felt totally defeated, but that didn’t mean I would give up. He just wouldn’t know what hit him.5
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“Oh my god, what happened?” my best friend, Allie, screamed when she saw my brunette hair in a messed up ponytail and my eyes all red and blotchy. I was wearing an oversized sweatshirt and my pajama bottoms. My alarm clock didn’t go off so I didn’t have any time to apply any make up whatsoever. I looked destroyed.7
Allie sat me down in one of the cafeteria chairs. “Explain everything,” she demanded. So I did. 8
I told her how I caught Connor kissing another girl on his porch when I went to over to his house a few nights ago. At first, I didn’t say anything for a few days, that maybe it was a mistake and I had just imagined it. It started tearing me up inside, but finally, I called him about it last night. He confessed everything. Connor told me how he had been going out with Nicole Johnson.9
I broke down crying a few times, but each time I did, Allie was there to comfort me. She’s the greatest.10
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History was usually the time of day I looked forward to. But today, it was the time I dreaded. I had to learn to accept that I was going to see Connor there always sitting in the seat in front of me.12
When I got there, Nicole was flirting with Connor, sitting in my seat. My seat! I rolled my eyes, not wanting to deal with any of them, and sat down at a desk in the back. The entire class, I had to put up with seeing them together (not that I could take my eyes off of them).13
As soon as the period ended, I ran to the bathroom and cried my eyes out. Eventually, my tears subsided. 14
Connor was not going to get away this easily. Besides, what goes around comes around.15
Continue? O.o
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I have a feeling I've read this story here before as well. I wonder why i didn't comment before. Any how, this is really good. Specially the last line - which is actually the title. I'm particularly interested to read how she takes revenge. The suspense deserves a clap!!
Good Work!
~Arooj~
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ok thnxs well keep up the worl
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Wow, really want to see how she gets the jerk back. I don't get how you can just start not liking someone one day and like a completely diff persn the next! Good thing I stayed away from highschool relationships.
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SWEET!
cant wait to see what comes next, and nicole sounds like a B**ch, and connor sounds like an ass, is this something that happened for real?
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Thanks so much and no, I just made it up.
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impressive
i like the suspense and drama. i like how you dont put an age on these characters. because a scenario like this can relate to all ages in school. so i like that i can imagine these characters as my age (18)
i think you should continue. i'd like to see what she does as either revenge, or just by getting over him.
as a little humor, *i read this in a email i received* "the best revenge on someone who steals your husband...is letting her keep him." hehe. just a thought if you would like to use it. good work -
This was very well written.
Cheaters always deserve whats coming to them!
It would be great to see you contuine this
Just to see what happens to Connor
What has she got planned?
It'd be great for her to over come the heart break
And get him back :]
This sentence i think has an extra 'the' write before probably.
'It was the probably the only time I felt totally defeated.'
Other then that a few periods where they didn't need to be it was well written
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This was amazing, I honestly liked the title and the story fitted it, I liked the story line and how you used it so please continue
Well done
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I saw quite a few sp/errors or periods instead of ..... marks, but remove all that junk away and focus on the story...This was great !!
If theres a way in your thoughts to continue this story, I say do it !
This story was awesome !
Great job ChokolateKISSES !
-Hismercy
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