The Last Dragon

The dragon soared above the burning village in a panic.1

"What have I done!" cried the dragon as he landed before a burning hut and attempted to pat out the flames.2

With another bellowing sneeze the hut was reduced to ash.3

“Oh, how I hate these colds!”4

A score of men with pitchforks appeared through the smoke.5

“Die foul drago-!” 6

*SNEEZE*7

The frustrated dragon began to cry. He looked down and there stood a boy brandishing a bottle of Bukley's – and then the dragon was better. The world grew bright and warm again.

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  • jauhar
    May 28, 2008

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    This was hillarious and very creative, a dragon with a cold But I felt sad that he died.If I read more into this story I'd come up with too much unrealistic things.
    Great story


    • Kagin
      May 28, 2008
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      I don't want my dragon to die either! i'm going to change the ending...

    • Kagin
      May 28, 2008
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      i'm glad i was able to make you happy and sad in under 100 words the idea of a dragon is pretty unrealistic too and in the end, isn' that why we are fascinated?


  • Elvenfairy
    May 27, 2008

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    this was a facianting story. I can't imagine a dragon being regretful about burning buildings, or being killed by a butter knife! Thanks for entering my contest


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    May 26, 2008

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    Lol I love the last paragraph its simply halarous. Men with pitchforks fall to a sick dragon, and little boy with a butterknife wins! Love it.

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