I see the blood drip down his arms and legs
he is blinded with his eyes are gouged with pain.
I shed a tear down his face to say 'i will never let you go'
With his last ounce of breath he replies 'i love you'
As he falls to a silent death
A contest entry
- Romantica 3# (Third attempt at a Romance contest) by Prodigious.Mirth.
350 points, ended July 26, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Can you please reply with openness about my story/poem
Comments
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Okay one capitilize
Two it was nicely done and simple
Not exactly what I was looking for but it was ok
Blair
good luck thansk for entering -
okay!!!
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Oh my god, what happened to make you write like that. It is like, crazy! I like it, great grammer and good topic! :P
- - - Miss.Devistation.*
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okay???
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