Blood Souls - The begining of my Book

INTRODUCTION1

For many years now the gates of hell have been guarded and hidden well, from the demon hunters. It wasn’t that they needed to hide, but there was one who called himself the God of Innocence, and they didn‘t want to risked there world apon this knew god.  This God of Innocence was the one who found the gateway to hell. He was the one who wanted all demons dead, the leader of the demon hunters. He had powers like the demons, but his powers were suppose to be more superior to any other demon, even the god. No on knew his real name, or who he was. But after a year the God found the gateway to hell, he started to take action. First he started to send death notes to the god. Saying that if the demons didn’t kill their selves that he would haunt every last one of them down and annihilate them one by one. Killing the king’s daughter first, Saya Yamaguchi After that first death note, the god of the underworld, Soto Yamaguchi became furious with the God of Innocence, for threatening his daughter.
Soto promised that he would haunt the God of Innocence down before he killed his daughter and people. So the war began between the demon hunters and the demons.2

CHAPTER ONE/3

After five long years of researching and investigating, Soto finally found the God of Innocence, at last. With this discovery he could haunt him down and kill him. But there was one problem; he didn’t really know who he was. He only knew where he lived and how old he was. Without the real information he needed, the devil became furious with his self. Thought of his self… as a disgrace to his people, that worshiped him. He only had bits and pieces of this so called…God of Innocence. But he needed more he wanted more, he craved for more. Alone with this craving and hunger for information and vengeance, he finally realized that his most four trustworthy demons of hell could help him. Tashiba Yumora, Negi Dashiki, Yukiya Obata, and further more Hashi Sashimi, the four great demon hell gods. They were merciless demons, didn’t have a care in the world, even if the flames beneath there bare feet would reach up and pull them under the pits of hell, for eternity. The devil didn’t care how evil, how determined just to see the sight of innocent blood spilt, or how devious, he only wanted that craving revenge he long been waiting for to sink his gnarling teeth into, to satisfy that longing pleasing hunger he’d long been waiting for. With these demons by his side he could find the God of Innocence and put him in his grave, that long have been waiting for him. Taking the information and putting it together, the devil came to an astonishing shock. The God of Innocence was only a mere mortal teenager, living in Tokyo, Japan going to a school called Toshodo High. Surprised by his information, he knew what he had to do. Send his demons to the surface, as high school students, and track down the God of Innocence.
“How could this be? I am the devil, the king, the god of this tinted hell, and a mere mortal dares to stand up and threaten Me.” said Soto in a raging voice.
“Who is this mortal you speak of, my lord.” said one of the four great demons Negi.
“How should I know, I may be god down here, but do you really think that I could find this God of Innocence alone. Only thing I‘ve accomplished on this investigation, is insignificant clues.” saying in another loud raging voice, which could be heard above the heavens.
“No my lord, but haven’t you forgot about us, the four most powerful demons in the underworld, ones who can see all.” said Negi in disbelief.
“I see Negi; bring in your brothers and sister.” Soto said.
“Yes my lord. Come fourth my brothers and sister.” said Negi, in a pleasing voice.
While the king sat upon his throbbing throne of vengeance, the chained doors began to slowly creak open. As the three insidious demons walked in, the room fell upon a great silence, only hearing their tainted hearts beat inside their soulless bodies. Revealing a fowl aura, that made the king and his assistance gasp for air. You could sense there aura growing stronger with every last step they took. With the boiling hot ground beneath them, beginning to groan even louder. Even the howling horn faced beast draped in the rusted chains, begin to rattle and shake, becoming more furious with there antagonizing presence. There was something wrong about them, something evil… like the beast inside of them had finally been awoken and was ready to kill at any moment. As they approached the devils throne, the silence broke upon the room, returning every sound that slipped away under their breaths. Leading toward one of horn faced beast broken off the rusted chains he was once draped in, heading toward the unbearable presence that bothered him so.
“Your beast would be wise not to touch my small family.” said Hashi with an untraceable smile on his face.
“Restrain my beast!” yelled out the lord, not knowing what lied ahead of him if he didn’t restrain the beast soon.
“Too slow, your beast must die, as such a remark of coming after my family.” Hashi screamed out with a chilling laughter.
“Yukiya, come forth my sister…kill the beast!” Hashi demanded
“Yes my dear brother, with pleasure.” she said.
As Yukiya kneeled downed, you could see her long black flowing dress that was once at her feet, now beginning to wrinkle upon the flames of hell’s unholy ground. She lifted her head among the heisting breathing ceiling, now beginning to stretch even taller among the skies of hell. With her dress upon the ground, lighting was starting to grow at every inch of her body. As she began to groan with the inflecting pain her body was receiving, her long cobwebbed hair begin to racing signals among the cave. Her eyes stirred into a flare of flames, as her dark pupils begin to disappear into her annihilating eyes. Then she begin to sing a pray among the once silence cave, sending a beautiful, high pinched voice among the heavens.
“Hail to the guardians of the ravens watch towers, grant me the power to hold the heavens light among these soulless palms.” she singed.
As Yukiya rose her boney hands above her, a form of blue and red lighting begin to shape into a sphere of flames in her palms.
“Azerac Syntose, lighting strike 100%!” she screamed out at the top of her lungs.
As she pointed her hands toward the rampaging beast, the bolting lighting flames shot out of her hands onto the beast muscular rock hard body. Throwing the beast among the cave ceiling, triggering the rocks and soil, this fell upon their restless souls.
The beast roared in agony as the lighting penetrated its body. The demons let out a cry of laughter including Negi, as if they like seeing the monstrous animal cry out mercy. Seconds later as the lighting started to fade away from Yukiya hands slowly, the monsters’ body begin to swell into an enrapturing form, taking on the looks of a rocky mountain.
“Die you beasts!” she screamed.
Suddenly the enrapturing swelling stopped, releasing the beasts’ body into soaring pieces. Spraying and pouring its blinding blood of acid among the kings cave. While it’s body degenerating was still at rest. As the body was still falling apart, Tashiba, one of the brothers flew into the air with his devilish wings, ripping out the monsters heart. Lying there among his hands, he lifted its heart among his face, sinking his black ragged nails beginning to sharpen into small like daggers. Piercing the heart, letting all its juices and blood sink into his mouth. While the blood poured down his widen mouth, you could hear the growls of the pleasing taste taking over his satisfying thirst of hunger.
“How tasteful, that really hit the spot.” Tashiba said, as the blood fell upon his chin and neck.
“Are you always hungry Tashiba, I mean you ate six humans this morning.” Negi said sarcastically.
“Well brother I wouldn’t be so hungry if I would have had ten humans instead of six.” he said snarling back.
“What the hell, you devious monsters just killed the king beast and the only thing you could say is…sorry. My lord, are you really going to let these self-centered demons onto the surface? The king’s assistance said in dispute.
“How you dare speak among us like that, you have no right… and if you did I’ll rip your heart out where you stand and eat it myself. So help me. Disgrace us again, and you will no longer be living in the presence of hell, nor anywhere else.” roared Hashi.
“Ha, Ha and I almost forgot to laugh at your infiltrating remark Hashi. Do you really think you can kill me, I am far way stronger than you … you…animal. I’m surprised your parents didn’t keep you on chains when you where once a child, but he tattooed chains on your neck maybe that was a sign for the devil, to embark you on chains himself.” he chuckled.
Hashi speed toward the king’s assistance, in such outrage and vengeance, that he couldn’t resist on spilling his blood. While his palm lay at the sight of his heart, ready to rip it out of his embedded chest.
“Stop, this is nonsense. Let go of him Hashi, and for you Michael do you really think you can take upon this demon alone? Even I can’t take him down. Also you would be very wise not to talk about his family in such manner, he has a very, very, short temper, and I will let you die, I won’t even risk my life in saving you or my demons, to be killed by him. Now apologize, or you will die by his hands.” he demanded.
“Yes…my lord. I apologize, for my action, as I’ve should have held my tongue and thought in my mouth.” Michael said unpleasing.
“I don’t except your apology, in other words I will accept it…if I could kill you.” Hashi laughed.
“Take or leave it, I don’t care you disgraceful monster.” Michael laughed back.
“Don’t worry Michael, cause I will be seeing you in your dreams, don’t forget I have the will to bring back those most painful and agonizing memories. That long has been lingering in the back of your head, in that empty space that is known now to be filled. For example, watching your poor mother die, as the demon hunters slaughtered her among your very eyes, and you were so scared that the only thing you did was run in terror, before they could kill you too. Don’t forget I always get the last laugh.” Hashi laughed again.
“Shut the hell up, shut up, shut up. Why are you doing this to me?” Michael screamed.
“Why else would I do this? You want a hint; you insulted my family.” Hashi grinned.
“Why won’t you leave the room, while I tell these four about there assignment.” the king insisted.
“Yes, thank you...my lord. Michael said.

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  • Boxingboy
    July 25, 2008

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    wow AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME AND I MEAN IT SO PLEASE PUBLISH IT

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  • Boxingboy
    July 2, 2008
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    okay this

    is going to be long to read wait at least a half hour maybe more i'm a slow reader