Looking at me with those innocent eyes1
We don't know what the future has in store2
Hopefully not needing to say goodbyes3
Our lives will no longer be a bore4
Our fates are tearing away from each other5
Our power source has stopped generating6
Everything has become such a bother7
Once like dog at mealtime salivating8
Everyone loves stealing all of our breaks 9
Chances also thought to be a delight10
Everyone loves eating all of our cakes11
All might end up in a big huge catfight12
Just listen to all that I have to say:13
This will not end up in a huge partay!
Author notes
The last 2 lines should be indented.
My favorite story right now is Romeo and Juliet.
A contest entry
- Whatever You Want by Shadow-Kissed.
225 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
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wow
I love the description in this. Well Done I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thanks for your entry.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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very very good.. i really like this. magnificent words... good phrases.. i really like this!
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