Euphoria

Sweet, sweet euphoria1

Wash over like an ocean wave and sweep me under2

To your cool depths 3

Echo with soundless bliss4

Like a warm rush of high5

Spin me till my head breaks the surface6

And goes under again7

Utter bliss.8

Sweet euphoria.9

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Short and simple, simple and short.

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  • Sgs gold member
    September 26

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    Yes, very short. Very well-written and good ideas, but I wish there actually was more to it, maybe expand on it more? Thanks for the entry!