To Speak My Mind

Where shall I find the one I miss so,
As i here their name in the call of the wind -
The years have past but still i search for my true love and first kiss,
The memories float past my mind each day to say - 'one day your here, the next your not. . . '
My memories remind me that i am not alone, i will never be alone, YOU are protecting me and i love you
now and always.
My speech is passed from friend to friend as to pass a bubble, as the bubbles touch the hands of lies and backstabbing, the bubbles vanish.
Each bubble holds a memory,
the bubble passes on and bursts.
As i may not remember your face, i remember the times we share
leading to the best quote of you - 'You are never alone no matter how far away i am. I will always love you'1


-In loving memory of a friend. A really great friend-

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  • Yoko
    June 2

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    Nice. I like the bubble part and the lover's quote. 'You are never alone no matter how far away i am. I will always love you'
    That is realy sad. Keep writing. Hehe, mew!


  • Laceration Happy
    May 28
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    Thanks for entering!

    Very nice, very nice!

  • living.angel
    May 25
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    kewl

  • Shadowed Phoenix
    May 24

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    I love the bubble metaphonre that you used in this poem. My only advice is to capitalize your I's. In a few spots the lines seem a little too long. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

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