~Angelically Numbed~

Pastel dreams knock at the window,
yearning to be released from this earthly grasp.
Fragrances urge hidden desires;
heavenly bound, angelically numbed,
in a world of limitations
... freedom within reach.

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    May 23, 2008

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    This is quite short but in its few lines are a masterpeice of description. I'd put in my favorite part but with a poem this short it'd be the entire poem. You chose your words wonderfully and used grammar. I'd love to see what you could do with a longer poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.