Fading.....

As I look out into the water1

I see your eyes looking thourgh me2

I know your fading3

I can feel it...4

I can see it...5

While your fading remember me6

Don't forget me7

cause i won't forget you8

Ill miss you 9

when your gone10

i know your fading11

you know it to12

when you fade away13

don't forget me14

cause i wont forget you15

you helped me up16

when i was down17

i knew you cared18

somtimes you got on my nerves19

but i know i still love you20

and when you fade away 21

don't forget me22

cause i wont forget you23

ill miss you24

when you leave us25

i know your fading 26

and i know you know it to27

when you fade away28

don't forget me 29

cause i won't 30

forget you31

i'll remember you when 32

you leave me33

I'll listen to your voice if no ones 34

talking at all35

ill always pray for you each night that 36

you make it thourgh37

and be happy38

whever you are39

and when you fade away40

don't forget me41

cause i know i won't42

forget you43

when you leave me44

ill miss you45

i know your fading46

and i know that you know it to47

and when you fade away48

don't forget me49

cause i know i wont forget you50

and when you fade away51

don't forget me52

cause i know i won't53

forget you....54

forget you....55

forget you....

A contest entry

This song is for my great gramma who I know is fading and when she does i'll miss her ( Oh and BTW this is going on the CD of the Songs that I'm Making)

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  • moonwriter
    June 6, 2008

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    That was amazing! You're a very talented song writer. If you ever put the song online, send me a link. I'd love to hear this.

    Awww. You wrote it for yoyr grandmother. That's really sweet. I hope she gets to hear this.