Passion Over the Internet: Part Two

Watches for his reaction having forgotten that fire is an element of passion watching as you catch them and smile,” Awe are you trying to get me hot for you, Alianne?" Smiling as he steps closer holding the ball in his hand as he slowly drains it of the energy his green eyes seeming to look at her soul as he looks into her amber eyes seeing her emotions play in her eyes. "Stop where you are Blaze before I freeze you, I don't care this time you have gone too far you know that I am with someone," she says as she holds an ice ball behind her back daring him to come closer. "Awe babe you know I can make you come to me. We are the same. We are meant to be together. Why do you fight your cravings?" As he walks closer to her before getting an ice ball to the stomach as she takes a few more steps away from him.1

Blinking tired eyes I rub them as my mom knocks on the door opening it because she knows I can't hear what she’s saying over my music as I have a couple missed calls on my cell phone. She tells me again that dinner is ready. Thanking mom I stand up and walk out of my room hoping that he’s still there but knowing this is probably the last time I will be speaking to him for a while. Laughing as he shakes his head looking at the computer screen. Laughing at how she acts when he does stuff like that since she knows that’s just how he is and wondering why she always seems so nervous when talking to him. Before thinking seriously and wondering why she only dates guys that her friends tell her are going to hurt her and do only making her cry and make her keep thinking less and less of herself.2

Standing up and popping his back he pockets his phone and gets ready for bed having watched TV with his parents tonight and needing to be up early for school. He lays down his head thinking up new characters as the dream comes to him again but differently this time. Looking up at her as she is wearing Latex and Leather a maniacal grin on her face as she holds her whip up high and brings it down the seven straps of it hissing like angry rattlers before smacking into his flesh with a sick thump making his back buck under the pain a deep groan having been ripped from his throat as he lowers his head seeing that he’s been bound on his hands and knees he struggles to get up again not liking this one bit. He fights the chains trying to get free so he can show her what real pain feels like but knowing that when his beautiful dream girl cries out in too much pain he will stop and they will just cuddle until she feels better.3

Blaze smirks as he notices that he is tied with silk and linen rope glad that she remembered this being a hard rope to get free from. If you aren’t skilled in getting your hands free of it. Or in more extreme cases strong enough to break the delicate looking rope. He looks up at her with a grin before standing up he rips the ropes off and grabs the whip away from her throwing it away he snakes a hand around her waist and pulls her close roughly as she groans feeling him already hard and ready” Dear did you really want to test it to see how much I would let you do to me? “saying this as with his free hand he reaches down and rubs her roughly" I’m sorry babe but you won't be in control of me like that ever.“ He sleeps like a corpse as this happens.4

She sits in her room writing and being bored sighing she heads to bed just thinking about things. As she starts reading the book she was finishing she calms down before jumping at hearing the phone buzzing next to her since she had it on vibrate. She answers the phone saying,” Hey what’s up? Yea sorry about missing your call earlier you know I didn’t mean to its just my music was up loud. You know I care about you why would you think that? “sighing she feels bad and settles in for a lecture,” I’m sorry ok? I really mean it I’m sorry I won’t miss a call again. Do you forgive me? Ok thank you sweetie you know I care about you. I was actually settling in to sleep I did a lot around here. Yes I was helping mom again with the animals. I promise I will talk to you earlier tomorrow. Ok night hunny.” She rubs her temples wondering why she deals with it when she knows he can get with someone else. Wondering why she doesn’t just break up with him.5

Sighing she gets ready for bed and hides under her blankets turning the light over her bed off as she turns her radio on and settles in for sleep. As she closes her eyes the dream is the same as it is every night but this is a little different the god that is part of her dream is tieing her with some ropes to the bed struggling he chuckles at her saying,” What did you expect? You were naughty so I have to punish you. Trust me you will enjoy it.” Looking up at him she is stunned again by his beauty his hair looking like its messed up but at the same time perfect like organized chaos. Before he turns those eyes on her feeling her heart beat she tries keeping eye contact with him but can’t as she lowers her head. “ I didn’t do anything why am I being punished Master…please forgive me for whatever it is that I did to you.” Shaking as even though she scared she can feel the heat between her legs as her nipples become erect. Rolling over on her side as this happens in the dream and curls up cuddling against the pillows on her bed.

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This is another section of the story. I hope you guys like it and just let me know so that i can keep writing more on the story...

Ok this is my first story in a while be honest but dnt kill me

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  • This is nice. IT keeps getting better. I like all the detail.

  • Rovingone
    July 6, 2008

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    Well, I like what I saw so far. It has a good story line and there's certainly no problem with visualizing it. I am interested in seein how it plays out.


  • Angelflower
    May 21, 2008

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    I really like this.. Your doing a really good job hun.. the imagery was really vivid and there was more dialog this time.. You did a really good job..
    keep it up..

    Angel

  • ForgottenSouls
    May 21, 2008

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    nice

    i'm afraid that murder seems like a good twist i want to add... definitely a good way to kill off someone that dares to disrespect you

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