Messed up ~ lyircs

Ok this is my first EVER time writing lyrics so I hope you like. Please be honest. Even if you tell me I suck. But put it an ickle bit nicer.1

Just got one more thing to say
before I take it all away
you tore apart
my *bunny*ed up brain, my heart
my life in pieces
and you threw them away
_______
i hate every part of you
what you did
i think i might
try something new
take this
and end it all
because of you
_____________
i thought you were
something that
would be like my drug
but instead
you make me feel
ill
__________
i hate every part of you
what you did
i think i might
try something new
take this
and end it all
because of you
__________
I dont need
this *bunny* anymore
i dont need
this bit anymore
I dont need
anything anymore
I dont need
this life anymore
_____________
i hate every part of you
what you did
i think i might
try something new
take this
and end it all
i hate every part of you
what you did
i think i might
try something new
take this
and end it all
I hate me
because of you