A pleasure seeing you again.
Like always my grand old friend.
After waiting for what seemed like an eternity,
Speaking with you for a few minutes is fine with me.1
You know I like you-
I Truly do!
But for some strange reason all you do
Is refuse, refuse, refuse.2
Exchange vows of love with me,
I'll show you what love can truly be,.
Let's become the envy of the rest.
Trust me, I'll pass your test.3
Show me yours, I'll show you mine.
The scars of dead love, time after time.
The scars that bring us both together,
The things that connect us forever.4
A broken heart can be healed,
A bleeding heart can be sealed.
A want for love can be fulfilled.
Secrets of the past can be concealed.5
Take my hand, I ask, and follow me.
I will escort you in this wonderful journey.
Take my hand and come along.
Soon you'll see me in a different light, it won't take long.6
7
A rose for you, Krysti, to symbolize the beauty, and pain, of Love.8
I will give you no pain.
- Armando Santana
Author notes
I wrote this for my girlfriend before we started dating. i love her!
A contest entry
- Poetry!!!! by Forgotten Anomaly.
900 points, ended June 5, 2008, 62 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Sing Me A Song by lexiconsthedevil.
130 points, ended June 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Awwwww ^^ XD by DeathNoteYaoi.
160 points, ended December 10, 2008, 26 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Great job ! keep it up
DNY -
Sounds like something a certain person used to say to me..Loved this. Great job.
-
this is amazing! i love it. you will do great in my contest!
-
Wonderfully written and your rhyme flows smoothly ~ best of luck in the contest
-
Ah grammer finally a poem with some grammer in it.
The poem is very well writen and very sweet. It seems very meaningful and hopeful. I hope the relationship words out for you. Overall a wonderful peice with deep meaning. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. -
That was very sweet, but I'm not sure if I feel the same about you. I guess I'm going to give you a chance, though n.n
Remember, that if afterwards, I don't feel the same, then I'll tell you and you have to stop pestering me about going out with you as much
But if it does work out.. :3
((Mmkies, to the poem its self))
This was very well written. It's a deep poem, and it allows you to feel the same as the poet, and is easily relatable.
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
