Waking up one morning a young, average boy slight of built gets dressed as he usually does after another night with the dream. Looking at the clock he hurries to the bus trying to stop thinking about the dream. Wishing it were something real and tangible especially her. Just thinking about her causes a twitch in his pants as his eyes go a dreamy and hazy greenish color as he thinks about her thick chocolate brown hair with eyes of milk chocolate until she goes into an orgasmic pleasure for his touch and her eyes turn a more golden color like a warm honey. Hearing everyone getting off the bus he realizes that he had been patting and rubbing a raging erection that quickly calms down when he sees the girls he goes to school with. Not that they aren’t attractive because they are attractive.1
Being an outcast he never has had a shot with any of them even though he has a few attributes that aren’t average like his eyes that are as clear as a looking glass that when directed at you it feels as if he’s looking into your very soul. Another more intimate part of him that isn’t average is his 8in., long 6in. circumference muscle of manhood that can and has scared many girls but has the potential to instead of having them scream “No Way!” it can make them scream his name “Blaze!!” through ecstasy again and again. As he goes through the school day he starts to think about the woman in his dreams before rationalizing that she can’t be real with her pouty full cherry lips or her milk soft moon kissed olive skin. Sighing he shakes his head trying to understand with his great expanse of knowledge why no girl will let him have the same pleasure that he gives them. When they give him the chance to show what he can do.2
All his life he was too smart and would get beat up for it when he got tired of being beat up he would fight back with a vengeance. Yea he would get in trouble but he didn’t care so as long as they would stop picking on him. Now he has a chiseled body, heart of a poet, intimate breath taking eyes, and sadly no one to share it with. When he gets home to hang out on the computer role playing with his friends he speaks to a girl that is a friend of his and really close to him. Knowing that she is taken and sighs as her words seem to hold a hidden meaning he tells her of his dream and asks if she knows anyone with that description she lies to him since she’s a little shaken with having had the same dream to almost the same detail as what he described to her but from the females perspective unable to believe that her friend could be the god that brought her screaming from the wet dream to chew on her pillow that she has every night as she explores her fantasies knowing since she is a mousy plain outcast of a girl that no man would show her real love.3
After all the bad relationships she has gone through and glad to be out of high school she knows almost better than anyone what its like to be hated for what you know and not able to socialize with many people. Being shy and timid plus having braces most of her life made it so not many would want to be around her calling her crazy or a freak when she would pass by. She smiles at his words feeling better and glad that she can help him as she starts to day dream of the god and his touch how he made her feel like a queen and something she wouldn’t ever deserve.4
With the hardened muscles of someone that had to fight for survival and scars showing stories that many words can’t tell. Nearly drowning in his eyes as her heart beats wildly as he looks at her before starting to wonder again what her friend looks like. Since she has never seen a photo of him and he has never offered up the imagination her mind would start to wander before hearing her mother call and sigh as she would tell him that she would be back in a few min and as soon as she could she would get back to talking hoping that he would still be on there since she had no other way of talking to him when not on this site. Glad to know that he’s not getting beat up anymore she starts asking questions as they usually do their characters doing the opposite of this while they seemed to have gotten into an argument and she starts chucking fire balls at him.
Author notes
This is the beginning of a story i hope you all like. Read it and tell me if you want more.
Ok this is my first story in a while be honest but dnt kill me
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Passionate indeed
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thank you hun..
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This was great! It inspired me to finish my Forbidden Fruit series. Can't wait to read Part 2 soon.
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-smiles and laughs-part two is ready to be read its right next to it.
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Intruging story Ali, I loved it; every single word of it. So tell me Ali, who is it that you like on AP? Hmmmmmm???
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why do you wanna know hun? and i hope you will read the next one
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I like the whole concept of each dreaming the same thing, I can't wait for the next part!
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well if you are 18 you can just click on the second one
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very introspective. i like the idea behind the story alot! I would really like to hear more from this plotline, definately.
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thanks for commenting on this and hopefully you will be able to write on more later
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it's good, don't really understand the reference to the fellows anatomy but hell I'm no artist so I guess I wouldn't anyway good write
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Thanks for the comment..umm interesting place to focus bro. and i hope that you read the continued works..though you may not want to.
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Fantastic
It is a very beautifully written piece. You are a very talented writer and the more you write and i read the more i long to be around you. You are very talented and i am proud of you. keep it up. -
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thank you my writing has changed a lil since you disappeard again. and i hope that you will continue to be a loyal fan..this will be tricky for me.
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this is a really good story and i liked everything about it, i see nothing wrong with it and can't wait to read the next part when it is posted......................
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well thank you and i will be writing more on it soon..as i figure out how to start the next part..
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You did a really good job here hun.. The only thing I would suggest is that you have just a little more dialog, but other then that you created a really vivid image and character.. I really like this hun.. you did a good job.. keep it up!!
Angel
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Thank you and i will try to have more of that in the next part. i am glad that you liked it.
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