Public Greeter Number Six

"I call upon you today, as one of you is a... MURDERER!" bellowed Colaca, as everyone gasped. "Whichcraft, where was you?" Whichcraft cried and sobbed and explained, "I'm a monkey-eating, banana-helping, toilet-smashing cheeseburger... with bacon!" Everyone gasped. "Can we add murderer to the list?" asked Colaca. "No," replied Whichcraft. "INNOCENT!"1

"Now, SnowRose-Wolf, where was you?" SnowRose-Wolf got up. "Well, it all started on Naboo, I watched the Rebellion and got in my spaceship with R2-D2. We hit a Time Warp and we crashed in the Middle of the Desert. I went into Cyber-Space and became... a GREETER!" Colaca laughed. "And...?" SnowRose-Wolf continued, "I was busy telling everyone how awesome Colaca is."2

"INNOCENT," he bellowed again. "Cactus?" asked Colaca. "I am not a greeter, I am a mental pateint, whoop-de-doo! I escaped CyberBarbara's Mental Hopsital. I was stuck inside during the murder of... Cheerful-Panda!!!"3

"It wasn't Panda, it was... Sage! I think..." Cactus stood up, "Was there even a murder?" Colaca sat down, "No, I don't think so..." They all sat there for ten years until Colaca said, "Let's put the Justice League out of buisness."4

Twenty years later, they finally got a name 'The Greeters' and they left to go on a journey to battle good and evil.5

"The End," spoke Nocturne. "And that is what would happen if Greeters ever did exist." The kids surronding him was scared. "I hope this story will never come true, but there is always a chance..." Nocturne looked at the sky, got up and walked away into the horizon, never to be seen again. Some say he was kidnapped by The Greeters, but nobody knows... nobody knows...

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  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    June 13, 2008

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    *laughs* How do you have a murder investigation when there wasn't a murder? This was cute, and I like how you used so many of the options - it made it a wild ride.

    And I KNEW someone would figure out Jack was the crazy one... *laughs*


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    May 23, 2008
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    Interesting.

    This was really weird. It seems that you are the key character, but did you find the killer? Nocturne disappeared. I had no idea. You think the greeters had something to do with it? Oh well, mayhaps.

    Thanks for entering 'Greeters are Taking over!!'

    Andy


  • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
    May 21, 2008

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    This is going to be fun.

    You certainly used the options and each one showed up well

    Oops how'd that Mod get in here--zap he's gone *Devil*

    Geri


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    May 20, 2008

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    Interesting. It was almost like you put all options in there, but not quite.

    Good luck and thanks for entering.
    Brooke
    greeter


    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      May 24, 2008
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      Hmm...odd you weren't the body this time .

      Geri

      • SageSyren Greeters member
        May 24, 2008
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        I know!!!

        They all like to kill me off. I might feel offended here, but I know everyone loves me so. But in this one I'm not DEAD!!!!

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