Love's Impact

It was pure magic the first time I saw your face. You were smiling and I smiled back at you. My heart was beating fast. My stomack all a flutter...I think I had just swollowed millions of butterflies. Love had grown a glorious flower, and now I could watch it bloom.
My eye teared over-joyed; it was true I was the happiest
woman in the world. Feeling your eye gaze into my soul.1

The we sat beside each other, held hands and I fell into your arms, we kissed and I became mesmerized every part of me requesting more. So I met you later inadvertently
captured by so many times we had shared sweetly.2

We talked, my love. Then I inhaled paradise. Secure, safe
awakenings felt perfect. Our spirts locked within sultry french kisses sweeter then warm honey I melted in your arms. We became mute while we discovered eternity. Moments we will remember as our private symphony. 3

Music playing inside my head match the rhythm of your every move. My smooth operator molded me as our spirit messed together in harmony. The I moaned out my darling Mace I love you.4

We will always have this time, engraved on our hearts...a special day that sealed our passion, love forevermore.
Someday we shall meet down by the sea, I'll take your hand and never leave you again. I love you madly!5

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  • adamcieslicki
    March 31

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    A lovely snapshot of two lovers in time. Some small spelling mistakes, but the imagery is good, very effective. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future


  • whatami
    May 26, 2008

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    Wow. So lovey dovey. My stomache almost lurched. In a good way. I'm gonna assume you intended this as poetry. Doesn't really pass as a poem. More prose. But it's still awesome. I love you comparing phrases. Great job, and good luck


  • kitigrl-sparkloholic
    May 21, 2008
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    Mushy Gushy

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    kiti

  • Brazos
    May 20, 2008
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    Thank you honey for describing our perfect day for me. It is indeed, moments we will remember as our private symphony.

    Getting to meet face to face meant so much to the both of us, the feeling was indescribable, but you came very close.

    I have we find that special meeting place down be the sea soon. I truly love you.

    Brazos