excpectations from a 17 year old?

i have to know1

what love is2

if he'll hurt me3

what i have to do4

i have to see5

what is done6

who to love7

what to miss8

i have to understand9

how it works10

who to hurt11

and who loves me12

what i cant get13

is how can i fall14

for a guy15

who16

wants17

nothing

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it only makes sense if youve been there before

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  • DinoRoar
    November 15
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    I absolutly get the last part, about a guy that wants nothing. I was with someone that I thought I loved who was like that. I finally came to my senses...


  • sweet guy
    October 3

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    awww i love it,very well written sweetheart, keep it up ashley, short but great, hope you are well


  • Intrepid
    May 20

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    I Know in some ways I have been there. I have fallen in love so many times..so deep to have my heart miss something that was not there....kinda if u get me

    great work

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