you freak cinq

"Do you know the amount of trouble you girls are in?" he said, nearly shouting. I bite my lip, but try and match up to Jenns, "I dont care" attitude. 1

His fone went off. 2

"Hello? ... Yes ... yes, they're here with me ... yes ... right away" he said, the put the phone down, looking a little deflated. 3

"Go and report to miss Alms, an ambulance is waiting there for you." At least he hadnt get to tell us off, i was scared of him. 4

We walk back to our classroom, and i was relieved to find the class had gone, but Miss Alms was there, nostrils flared, pointing a shaking arm towards and ambulance guy.5

That, i think, is where the reality of it all sunk in. We had hospitalized a "fellow pupil"...fucking bastard more like. 6

I answer all his questions dumbly7

"name?" he asked8

"Caz"9

"Age?"10

"15"11

"Do you know the police will be getting involved?"12

I just nodded dumbly. How could i not have expected the police to get involved. I wimper at the thought of going into a police station again...13

"Baby im so sorry" I hear Jenn whisper to me. I turn to look into her serious eyes. 14

i bite my lip and frown, why did she always make it seem like it was always her fault?15

"its as much my fault as it is yours" i say weakly, trying to reasure her, and myself that i was fine. "you didnt ask me to do that, i decided to."16

She hugs me close, i try to hug her back, then i notice the shards of glass sticking into my arm, and i nearly faint. Jenn seemed not to have noticed. she was following an ambulance man, who must have called us away, but i was too shocked to have hurd. 17

i followed her quickly, and sat next to her. she ran a hand over the massive gass on her face, from where she had made spectacular contact with the table. 18

i couldn't stop looking at my arm. i was going to have stitches...i saw Jenn looking at me, and at my arm. i tried to make it look as if everything was ok, not to worry her19

"im gunna have stitches!" i say, trying to sound like i had always wanted stitches. but just the thought of it, made my stomach turn. 20

then jenn broke down. i was completely shocked, i had hardly ever seen her cry, it was usually me who did that. i tried to think what Jenn would do, if i was crying. 21

i hold her in my arms, ignoring the pain in my arm, tears threatening to fall down mt face. but i couldnt let them. i had to be strong for her now, not the other way around.22

When the ambulance finally stopped, we climbed out shakily, and followed the guy into the hospital. i was a rush of people in coloured uniforms, running around with needles and....NEEDLES!23

"no, i cant...."i whisper to Jenn....i started to turn aroud, tugging on Jenns arm24

"whats the matter hunny?" said Jenn soothingly, trying to calm me a bit, because i was getting frantic. 25

"needles" i whisper. Jenn understands in a second. my biggest fear is needles. i just cant stand them. 26

"it will be alright hun, i prom-" but i had already started running. i was out the door, before i noticed Jenn running along beside me. she made me stop. she put her hands on my shoulders, and spun me around to face her.27

"please caz, we need to get your arm looked at..its for the best..." 28

my breathing was becoming faster...all i could see where images of needles...i gasped...and fainted29

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i liked writing this bit! teehee...i hate needles too.....*makes a face* anyway, i hope you enjoy reading it!!

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  • love me always
    February 3, 2005
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    i love it...i love needles tho they rock! i m weird like that lol...good story

  • Latino Heat
    January 26, 2005
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    wow this is really good keep up the good writes
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  • Porcelain Doll
    January 24, 2005
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    So do I... My biggest fear :| *sigh* This is awesome. I can't wait to read more
    ~Amy

  • MightyBoosh
    January 24, 2005
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    There will be another chapter right? Omg! your so so so good at this! I feel invloved lol with whats going on This is way better than to kill a mocking bird! Lol. Cant wait for your next installment chat to you soon.
    Excellent yet again dudette!
    Love Ya~

    Carla

  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    January 23, 2005
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    aww this is so good! is Caz alright? write more!! lol
    love ya!
    Kami

  • crying-blood
    January 23, 2005
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    aw thanx hunni you are a great writer too. i thought i was crap when i first started writting, but people have been so supportive, and i have got better since i first joined.
    im glad you like the stories, and keep up your good work hun
    -mina-


  • January 22, 2005
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    on such a good roll

    great roll. ur such a good writer. i wish i could b more like u in my writing.

  • devils desire
    January 22, 2005
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    hey babes! i kno i alreayd left a comment, but u kno the drill! need to comment more! stoopid site! lol not rele i luv u site!!! heheheh randomnes!!! i hope u limke this comment i left u bubs!!! c u soon wen i shall show u a pic of chris!!! heheh luv ya xxxxxx

  • devils desire
    January 21, 2005
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    heya hun! this is a well good story so far!!!! lol ummmm which part is this? lol come on msn soon! lol ile b readin the next parts of the story now dudette! c u soon luv ya xxxxx


  • Ghost of a Siren
    January 20, 2005
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    Very awesome and realistic

  • malvadadiosa
    January 20, 2005
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    Great job again.I am really liking this story a lot.I can't wait to read more of this one.Keep up the good work and keep me posted.

  • Absence of Grace
    January 20, 2005
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    could you possibly make this story any better! this shit is great.....write more soon...toodles!

  • mrgoose
    January 20, 2005
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    yet again i am surprised by your talent....


  • petrichor
    January 20, 2005
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    Hey. i'm liking it. So cool. hope they don't get ito much trouble they could get the boys for harrasment, thats a crime to! i like i and can't wait for the next chapter


  • Angel Aeris
    January 20, 2005
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    Cool i'm afraid of needles also so i can see where they were coming from keep up the good work i hope to see more of your work very soon. **


  • BlooQKazoo
    January 20, 2005
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    ooh hoo! i love it...must write more but im in tech and meant to be doing work. but im not *grins sheepishly* haha lol oops hes coming over bye xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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