The Darkness

Rocking back and forth, Tristam observed his surroundings. His eyes shifting from the down-pouring raindrops to small animals he could feed on. Suddenly, he could smell fresh human blood. Rising to his feet, a distance away...1

Beneath the waters, a body floated on by. Within a split second, he ran down to the waters to catch up his prize. As he pulled the body from the waters, he looked down into the soft face... a face he knew long ago.2

"What..." he whimpered... "What have you done to my immortal soul now," he cried out to the winds, as if he were talking to fate itself...3

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...to be continued........

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  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    May 19, 2008
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    ooooo!

    I'm liking it! Wow I really do like it...so far!