I am swimming in the ambivalent waves of love and hate1
drowning on the barren dessert of your bode2
nothing grows.. 3
only the bleak clouds hanging above my head4
ready to pour rain at any moment5
you drive me mad with the unquenchable thirst you brought6
leaving my soul aflame with desire7
nothing soothed..8
nothing consoled..
A contest entry
- Love Sucks by trackrunnengirl24.
175 points, ended May 23, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Very good.
Good poem well expressed. One typo: dessert= desert.
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wow. that was very interesting...
good luck and thanks for entering! -
I actually really liked this!
It was great!
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