my first warrior cat poem:

I hear a hiss in the night1

i guess it's time for one good fright2

i crept along against the river still3

i hear a the leaves behind me sound so far away4

i can't see a thing! 5

my eyes are open, but everything is very dark6

i still hear the hissing sounds7

coming from so very fa away8

then i felt a jolt of pain9

am i dead? did someone kill me with their paws?10

then i turned around and sniffed the air11

it's shadowclan! i gasp outloud.12

"don't mess with me," i yell. "i'm not a warrior no more"13

then the warrior backed down letting out a shrillful hiss14

i crouch down, trying to hide out of sight15

this is all i can think of, anyone want to help???? it's in the eyes of Jaypaw. So, please help.

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