The movie theatre was dark by the time she entered, and she quickly made her way to the first aisle she came to. Settling in the last seat of the empty row, she sighed in contentment as the previews began. She hadn’t intended on coming to the movies, but couldn’t exactly be caught skipping classes. A small rustle beside her made her look, and realizing that it was a woman arriving late, she ignored her for the large screen. 1
Eventually, and after more than a few previews, the main feature began. The story, although slightly boring, was highlighted with some rather good sex scenes, all of which made her squirm slightly in her seat. The action between the two main characters was hot, and it was making her a little warm between the legs, too. 2
Suddenly, she felt something on her thigh, a light, nearly feather soft caress. Looking down, she saw a hand, and traced the arm up to the woman that sat beside her. Taking a good look in the limited light, she could tell the woman was a few years older, and very good looking. A small smile crept to her lips, as her fingers continued to caress. 3
Although she’d never done a thing like this before, or even had thoughts of another woman, curiosity and the anonymous nature of the darkened area made her curious. Plus, she was getting wet from the sex on the screen, and needed some relief. 4
Slouching down slightly, and allowing her skirt to ride up, she glanced at the woman again. Opening her legs was all the signal the woman needed. Fingers slid down, tensing slightly as they encountered already wet panties. A finger worked below the material, playing briefly on the outside, before entering. 5
Moving in her seat, and trying not to cry out at the exquisite feel of the fingers, she opened her legs wider. As another finger slid in, she massaged them with her muscles, which immediately brought a third finger in. The movie now forgotten, she gyrated slightly in her seat, glad that they were sitting in the last row, with no one in front of them. 6
The fingers moved in and out in a delightful rhythm, making her wetter by the second. The feeling was building just above her legs, and she clamped a hand over her mouth as she came all over the woman’s hand. Still, the fingers didn’t stop moving, and she felt herself coming again. 7
Suddenly, the fingers withdrew, and she watched as the woman brought her hand to her mouth, liking each digit as she watched the movie. In one fluid movement, the woman slid to the floor, turned, and brought her face in between her legs. 8
Biting her hand to keep from crying out at the sensation, she pushed against the tongue that was licking her like she’d never been licked before. It was unbelievable, and as she felt herself cum for the third time, she brought a hand behind the head ground her self against the face.9
When she was completely spent, the woman pulled her skirt down, got up and returned to her seat. Not a word passed between the two, and when the movie was over, the woman got up and walked away without a second glance. 10
What did you think? Please comment!
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P1: She ignored her and turned her attention to the large screen instead. (would have read better) P8: Licking not liking. P9: Licking her as not like would sound better. having no names,especially the first one makes it impossible to connect to the people in the story in any real way but,the intimacy of the sexual act lends an idea that this is not just another encounter,maybe the characetrs in the movie had names..but,that's not relevant to the story. It is well written but,needs work.

beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This was great...very descriptive and tastefully done. I would have never thought of a trip to the movies like that..
You have a spelling error in the first para.
Well done i loved it
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