Contradiction

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Dancing in the moonlight was the hope for the dead.2

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Contradiction, one of your words, was my title. And I used hope, moon & light. Though I don't know if the title and moon & light count. :] Cool contest.

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  • Krystiinee
    June 1, 2008

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    i really love this
    it's so short but sounds really cool to read and seems like there would be more meaning than you get at first glance..
    iunno, all i know is i like it
    (:


    • Taylor Renee
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you!

      And it does have more meaning, great that you see that.

      THANKS!


  • WhatALovelyDay
    May 26, 2008
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    ooooo. That's very inspiring. It almost makes me want to write a story around it O.O


  • I Dare to Dream
    May 19, 2008

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    I.LOVE.THIS. Plain and simple. It's amazing how you put so much meaning into so few words. It goes to show how much incredible talent you have.

    • Taylor Renee
      May 19, 2008
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      Why thank you

      Glad SOMEONE likes it! *cough* Randy *cough*



      Thanks, Nailie. You can always make me feel better.


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ
    May 18, 2008

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    Hmm...there's a meaning here, but my little brain's not getting it.

    *thinks harder*

    RJ


  • asthray.heart
    May 17, 2008

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    Do you mean there was hope for the dead? You used the words that's all that mattererd, first one but to use one in your title.

    tnks for entering and goodluck.

    ebunni

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