Gone to war, a cat war story Part 1 Prolouge

Prologue
There once was a time, when PetalClan, RainClan, WolfClan, and TreeClan all lived in harmony. 1

But then, SharpClan came, led by the terrible Sharpsky.2

They would steal prey and fight over little things. In their first year, SharpClan killed 85 cats. 3

In strip-tree of SharpClan's eighth year, after 6,000 killings, the other Clans declared war and began to fight. Any cat that was over six moon-cycles old would go into war, including elders and pregnant and nursing mothers.4

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Now, after 28,000 killings so far, every tom and she-cat are watching thier back. Will this cruel, bloody, war go on forever? 6

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Wow...this is unusual, to say the least! Very well-done, indeed.

    I am a bit lost about the "
    In strip-tree of SharpClan's eighth year" thing.

    HT